Just Remixed it. I hope it sounds better now.
We are quite proud of the result of this song.
"Hidden in a Cloud" was the first song we wrote as a band. After a few years (and considering that not the majority of us liked it) I decided to re-write it and this is what it came out.
We recorded it today in my place's living-room, so the sound quality is not the best, though it's not that bad.
We'd really appreciate any feedback you can give to make it improve in its production and its sound, so PLEASE leave a comment!
Regards

           > Crack (Moncho, Iszil, Ozo, Boby)

Moncho: Main Vocals, Bass Guitar, Harmonies, Tambourine.
Iszil: Acoustic Guitar, Harmonies.
Ozo: Keyboards, Harmonies. (Originally Bassist)
Boby: Drums, Harmonies.

Lyrics:

Father Sun come to shine my life
Mother Moon stay with me tonight
Uncle Wind blow my dream away
Grannie Earth open up my way

Grandpa Sea come to was my face
Brother River come to join my race
Sister Nature grow up on my feet
Cousin Fire burn my pain and fears

Where are you now?
I'm hidden in a cloud

PS: You have to excuse for the pronunciation issues, but the singer had forgotten the lyrics so he had to read them while he was recording and he didn't have time to practice

Mate love it.
Evocative organic music narrative and the oh yeah the  lyrics really strike a chord .
Texture mix of instruments  is great & the guitar tone spot on  very impressive.

Use of claps  and didge  plus vocal harmonies make whole song a totally pleasurable listening.
Thanks for posting
Top show boys
greg

 

I love it man, sounds like an OST of some movie! Kickass job  man. Love the guitar harmonics, and the parts. Vocals are good too, increase volume a bit in the verses.

Great job overall. Not your best, but surely one of your good works.

Wow great guitar work! Brilliant!!

Yeah I agree with painkiller the vocals are a little quiet!

Love the chord sequence starting at about 1:53, wasn't expecting it!

I feel an Ausie Vib, especially at the start.

Love the arrangement, it builds up very nice, just right, keeps it interesting.

Sort of reminds me a bit of The Beatles later stuff, but with Ausie feel.

Perhaps add some guitar solo's???

Great song!!!

Thank you all for the comments.
We are going to boost a bit more the vocals for a final mix, though this is just a demo anyway. Still trying to get time and money to record on a professional studio.

          > Iszil