A song I wrote for my older brother
(Obviously)
Its really about learning life lessons
(Not always in the most appropriate way)
Through him

Thanks for the listen
And tell me what you think!

I already love the guitar work... haha i thought it was done when the music stopped! Nice tone on your voice, man i don't know how you guys have that resonance. Usually I would say the song is short but i think ti's good, the guitar work is sufficient. Good job!

Loved the guitar work and your voice... well, all the song.
Just try to fill that blank gap with, at least, ambiance noise of the recording.
Anyway, very very good.

           > Iszil

Great track...
Suggestions:
Found your voice a bit strong on the higher mids,I would tweak a little so it cuts some out.This might drop the volume on it just a little,If not I would drop it also a tad because the guitar sounds a bit distant.Lastly you have a real fast gate on the noise reduction for the guitar which makes the sound lack organic feel, whenever the guitar comes in you here the ambient hiss bleeding through.Might be better to leave some of it in in order to minimize that unnatural silence.The song and you vocal performance are awesome.Great feeling.

love this song! i'm gonna downloaded!