VERY rough piece I wrote, I know everything isn't right on in the least lol. Just asking if this is something I should continue working on and if there is anything I could work on besides timing and obviously more lyrics.

Sounds good, I like the build up at the start. Depends what sort of sort genre you are going for really

Quality guitar part written, i thought it was going to be a piece for solo guitar to start with, but good work

Is that an electronic Drum Kit?
Yeah just the timing, abviously extend it work on the arrangement, work a little on the production

Keep at it

Yeah it's an electric.