Atmosfearic Disturbance |
This is the first track on "Off Course"
Thanks for listening.
Hope you like it.
Let me know what you think.
Thanks for listening.
Hope you like it.
Let me know what you think.
This stuff rocks!
Love the sound quality of all the instruments, including the vocals as well! ESPECIALLY love the bass intro, along with synth sounds. Near the beginning, the off-beatness part really worked well, though it was hard to keep a beat to, haha.
Good work!
--XFactor--
Love the sound quality of all the instruments, including the vocals as well! ESPECIALLY love the bass intro, along with synth sounds. Near the beginning, the off-beatness part really worked well, though it was hard to keep a beat to, haha.
Good work!
--XFactor--
too much studio feel in my ears
synth sounds are bit out of date but there is a well-balanced game between rock guitar ballad and progressive style. the strong reverberation in the tracks makes it quite dark.
other than that a good composition
synth sounds are bit out of date but there is a well-balanced game between rock guitar ballad and progressive style. the strong reverberation in the tracks makes it quite dark.
other than that a good composition
re: Atmosfearic Disturbance |
50 or so seconds before the trak starts over a very lame sample ...........
if the trak started at 0:57 or so ..........maybe better... or 1:16
its a good shot ...........
But song needs vocals in much earlier........
its a 'song structure' thing here .....the ideas are great !!!!
but need organizing to make more sense..........
plus the voc is just in the mix so i hear the tune but not the words!!!
I could be wrong of course but thats my input ......
ideas great ............. work it out
fish
if the trak started at 0:57 or so ..........maybe better... or 1:16
its a good shot ...........
But song needs vocals in much earlier........
its a 'song structure' thing here .....the ideas are great !!!!
but need organizing to make more sense..........
plus the voc is just in the mix so i hear the tune but not the words!!!
I could be wrong of course but thats my input ......
ideas great ............. work it out
fish
Sorry Swordy but I disagree completely with yor input,that intro is a great intro for what sounds like progressive rock....Loved the loose feel but yet seems very tight ,a bit rush like to my ears..Nice indeed..Did find the keys just a little loud compared to the rest at the song in the intro and break before solo....Cool changes
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