#1July 19th, 2009 · 03:48 AM
10 threads / 10 songs
39 posts
United States of America
Atmosfearic Disturbance
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This is the first track on "Off Course"
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#2July 19th, 2009 · 02:05 PM
50 threads / 32 songs
292 posts
Canada
This stuff rocks!

Love the sound quality of all the instruments, including the vocals as well! ESPECIALLY love the bass intro, along with synth sounds. Near the beginning, the off-beatness part really worked well, though it was hard to keep a beat to, haha.

Good work!

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#3July 19th, 2009 · 04:21 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,398 posts
United Kingdom
Love the intro
Great drumming.
Bass guitar needs more punch.
Guitars left channel too loud.

Another great band performance
#4July 20th, 2009 · 11:15 AM
190 threads / 27 songs
2,845 posts
Germany
too much studio feel in my ears

synth sounds are bit out of date but there is a well-balanced game between rock guitar ballad and progressive style. the strong reverberation in the tracks makes it quite dark.

other than that a good composition
#5July 21st, 2009 · 04:16 PM
176 threads / 26 songs
2,342 posts
United Kingdom
re: Atmosfearic Disturbance
50 or so seconds before the trak starts over a very  lame sample ...........
if the trak started at 0:57 or so ..........maybe better... or 1:16
its a good shot ........... 
But song needs vocals in much earlier........

its a 'song structure' thing here .....the ideas are great !!!!
but need organizing to make more sense..........

plus the voc is just in the mix so i hear the tune but not the words!!!

I could be wrong of course but thats my input ......

ideas great ............. work it out

fish
#6July 21st, 2009 · 11:44 PM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
Sorry Swordy but I disagree completely with yor input,that intro is a great intro for what sounds like progressive rock....Loved the loose feel but yet seems very tight ,a bit rush like to my ears..Nice indeed..Did find the keys just a little loud compared to the rest at the song in the intro and break before solo....Cool changes
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