I like this, the levels are really well done, and your voice is really good on this, if i was one of the ones that said your last one was mechanical, then you have definatetly redeemed yourself on this... I will have a look at your old one to see if i was one of the people who said that, if i did, and that was my only real comment, i can only presume it was a good tune that was played too tightly to a mechanical drum, but until i listen again, couldn't really comment...
Back to this one, good job, keep it up!
Back to this one, good job, keep it up!
| It's been done |
The words are nice, but the melody is repetitive and has been done too many times by a lot of other bands.
its not really moving, you just need to play around with it more, it sounds like it should really move me, but it doesn't do much for me.
also i think that your main riff was used by, like, the beach boys or someone like them.
Only they sang it.
its not really moving, you just need to play around with it more, it sounds like it should really move me, but it doesn't do much for me.
also i think that your main riff was used by, like, the beach boys or someone like them.
Only they sang it.
Motherman wrote…
mmm.... erm...... the percussion is good but im afraid the rest is boring and needs to be exterminated before i kill my myself.
oo by the way... if u boil an egg after taking it directly out of the fridge it will crack!!!!
Please do the world a favor and continue with the self extermination. Trolling insects such as yourself are a useless waste.
| re: It's been done |
UnfitforDuty wrote…
The words are nice, but the melody is repetitive and has been done too many times by a lot of other bands.
its not really moving, you just need to play around with it more, it sounds like it should really move me, but it doesn't do much for me.
also i think that your main riff was used by, like, the beach boys or someone like them.
Only they sang it.
I have to agree w/ unfitforduty; this chord progression and feel has been done so many times before that in my opinion it's a waste of time to build a song off of it. Plus the song doesn't have any dynamics or real color to it, so it seems to flatline the whole time. Maybe hold out one of the chords longer than the others, try a different strumming pattern, find a way to intensify the chorus, put some hits the band all does at once... anything to make it seem like you're not the 1millionth person to use this progression!
| re: who's a bitch? |
reddog wrote…
3 chord "bitch" song....... explore more chord structures.
boring..........sorry but you asked
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