Okay, this is the same beat now mixed with some rap freestyle. Comments always welcome

can you please upload the lyrics?
backing track is nice with some formula 1 vibe. but I would love to hear some female voices in the way of some staccato chords to break up the monotone shouting

thanks for the comment. to be honest, i was just happy getting someone to rap on it. i'm still learning this stuff and hope to actually get into the genre i love: r&b.

nice... it's good to have a variety in bandamp! Welcome to bandamp! nice freestyling to it. Yea, your vocals sound monotone, hmmmm....is it possible to make a melody for it. I hear a lot of contempary popular hip-hop music with melodies. They're not singing but they're kinda like chanting. I mean you don't have to edit the music, but I guess try humming a melody to it. Well, you did a good job on the freestyle!

I'm no expert in this style, but you have put it together well, production pretty good.
The langauge is a bit strong, be carefull

Denis

thanks for the comments...but just to clear things up: i am not the one rapping here..lol.. i cant rap to save my life! the rapper on the track (sean p) heard the beat thru a friend and wanted to rap on it. i hope to make r&b in the future, but if the project heads the hiphop/rap route, then i guess thats the way it is..lol...thanks again..

The rapping is pretty good; yeah, watch the language, hahaha...

I can see improvements on the beat. The strings in R&B usually sound a little more sharp; it sounds like you've written the beat for an action-type movie, rather than rap, so make sure you add some more distinction between each instrument part.

Keep at it!

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