#1June 17th, 2009 · 12:17 AM
24 threads / 15 songs
160 posts
United States of America
Instrumental
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This song is not in a battle


HELLO!
A keyboard riff I made up a long time ago. I couldn't progress that idea and I just remembered it while jamming with my brother on the keyboard 3 hours ago. My mom heard it and she says it was good. And she told me she wanted to write lyrics to it.
I'll probably make it my own later, make it faster into more pop/rock/emo kind of song.

I know it doesn't have lyrics right now, but I haven't posted a song here so I just wanna put this up.

But here's the song progress.
intro
verses 2x
prechorus
chorus
verse 1x
prechorus
chorus 2x

pretty simple... enjoy!!

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#2June 17th, 2009 · 10:20 PM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
Man I tell you if you were to take it even more slow and with out all the extra sounds this could be a kick butt piece..Either way the chord selection gives it self to many arrangements so do what you hear...I really like this chord work...
#3June 18th, 2009 · 04:09 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,394 posts
United Kingdom
Sounds like a John Lenon composition, I could just imagine [Yes a little pun] him singing to this.
I like the way it builds up, interesting peice.

NICE JOB
#4June 18th, 2009 · 08:32 PM
24 threads / 15 songs
160 posts
United States of America
thanks marino. The reason I added layers and strings to it, is that I can't really play the keyboard that well and the
riff is so simple with the bass walking down the scale. I added the strings and the drums to make it more interesting.
thanks to you to denis! Sounds like a john lennon composition.... hmmm. Man I feel so humble. thanks denis!
#5June 19th, 2009 · 05:57 AM
18 threads / 18 songs
52 posts
Germany
promising
yes this is very professional composing. with vocals this can become nationwide #1
#6June 20th, 2009 · 02:27 AM
24 threads / 15 songs
160 posts
United States of America
haha thanks Eftos... if I could only have good voice
#7June 23rd, 2009 · 01:44 PM
55 threads / 30 songs
1,558 posts
United Kingdom
I like this one a lot - although there's no vocal melody there yet, it's easy enough to put something over.
Ok, the strings are WAY too loud, and the drums are a little boring, but the actual composition is very nice.

As Eftos says this has promise.

Good stuff.

#8June 23rd, 2009 · 05:45 PM
176 threads / 26 songs
2,342 posts
United Kingdom
re: Instrumental
Great Foundations to a 'building' song .......

nice one ......... treat it as work in progress y??

fish
#9June 24th, 2009 · 08:57 PM
24 threads / 15 songs
160 posts
United States of America
man... I know this got potential, but I know it's just potential. It's not anything great yet. But Thanks for everyody's support!!
#10June 25th, 2009 · 01:11 AM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
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Ok, You know it has potential..then you must know that is very repititous also..at least it is to me...Its a very nice song that could be a great song...I'm not hearing a break in the chord structure...yes there are breaks from Verse's
to chorus's....but its lacking a bridge...just a small piece to set it apart
I think its lacking structure in that respect....but , like I said..its a nice sound....keep at it
If you ever get this to a final cut and your Mom doesn't write lyric's....I wouldn't mind giving this a go...I agree it would sound cool with a slight speed increase ....

Flyer

Nice rating
#11July 10th, 2009 · 12:02 AM
1 threads
3 posts
United States of America
definitely has promise! i like it.
#12September 16th, 2011 · 11:58 PM
26 threads / 26 songs
80 posts
United Kingdom
I like this very much. Its so relaxing.
#13September 19th, 2011 · 10:45 AM
32 threads / 28 songs
201 posts
United States of America
Nice tune mate. Can't say much that hasn't already been said.
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