This is something I did on fruity loops. I.ve only just gt it so i'm just trying to find my way around it. hope u enjoy

cool... the more you do the better you'll get. Haha I like that one in the end... "Whats that knob do?" Try to add a lot of layers put more stuff in it. I sounds kinda thin to me.

Moody ..... yes thin (lacking effects), like the roll/break up to 2:00 you could have faded in, panned, reversed, anything to make it more human.
I really like the composition I just think it needs loads of tweaking.......of knobs ..... make the sounds sound like the ideas of sounds.....   wow heavy !

Anyway.....What's this knob do?........he makes songs in Fruity Loops 
Sorry, someone had to.....!  

Way cool..Very dark angelic in feel..I like the drama the sound projects,,Sounds quite big mate..Nice track...Maybe some more lead melody somewhere can be cool..Also the break at about the 200 mark needs a bit of more dynamics worked in to create a bigger build IMHO..

Hmm I quite the simplistic approach, keeping in with the mood, the hats a are too low in the mix
Yeah maybe some more lead or riffs

Cheers

ohh.... when you decide to add a melody to any song, experiment with the tone. Like some melodies sound better more trebly or more warm. lol because it annoys me when my brother plays the melody in a really really sharp lead tone. haha

Nothing like anticipated with a name like "Malmsteenrules" (obviously a very personal taste; I can't listen to him for more than about 2 minutes - and a certainly can't watch him for more than 30 seconds.... but I digress! lol )

As far as the composition is concerned - I really like it!  Dark and brooding, with a beat that carries the listener along for all of the 4 and a half minutes.  Perhaps you could have put the "what's this knob do?" sample in different places just before a significant change of sound, and follow it up with another comment such as "oh, that's what it does!"  Who knows!!!

I enjoyed the music though.

Welcome to the fruity loops road!  Its a very very long one but really fun.  As a first attempt this has some cool stuff going on.  Although fairly simple it does hold your intrest throughout.  Going to agree with Kings in terms of just tweaking controls to make everything sound more human.  A keyboard limits you to just on/off of notes.  Search for tutorials on Automation in FL studio, and you'll really start to have some fun!!!

Kobeshi