Hi Guys,

Here another song, performed and written by me. It's not the final version though.
I dont like some lyrical parts, and also the bridge is a bit weak.

Anyways, enjoy! Hope you like it.

Steven

Great vocal delivery, yeah that organ is wicked. The piano is nice too, nearly forgot the Bass, yeah not bad.

The only sound that doesn't fit to me is the Drums, they sound weak/thin, everything else has got body, dynamics.

NICE, I enjoyed it.

I think Denis has a point; I suggest keeping the sound you have for drums at until 0:05 when the piano kicks in - change the drums there for a clearer sound. The piano sounds great, the vocals are even better too!

The bass blends in very well!

I'd also like to comment a bit on the vocals as well. The echo effect (I don't know what it's called, heh) really works well here - I'm usually not a big fan of reverb, but in this case, it works great.

VERY well done. Good work, RazoR!

     --XFactor--

Nice vox and key performance..Loving the electric piano vibe...excellent vocals...Yes the drum performance works but the funneled sound takes away..Im wondering if a percussion and flute work might do this song more justice..Great song writting skills..Awesome lyrics...