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Hi Guys,
Here another song, performed and written by me. It's not the final version though.
I dont like some lyrical parts, and also the bridge is a bit weak.
Anyways, enjoy! Hope you like it.
Steven
Here another song, performed and written by me. It's not the final version though.
I dont like some lyrical parts, and also the bridge is a bit weak.
Anyways, enjoy! Hope you like it.
Steven
Denis wrote…
The only sound that doesn't fit to me is the Drums, they sound weak/thin, everything else has got body, dynamics.
I think Denis has a point; I suggest keeping the sound you have for drums at until 0:05 when the piano kicks in - change the drums there for a clearer sound. The piano sounds great, the vocals are even better too!
The bass blends in very well!
I'd also like to comment a bit on the vocals as well. The echo effect (I don't know what it's called, heh) really works well here - I'm usually not a big fan of reverb, but in this case, it works great.

VERY well done. Good work, RazoR!

--XFactor--
Nice vox and key performance..Loving the electric piano vibe...excellent vocals...Yes the drum performance works but the funneled sound takes away..Im wondering if a percussion and flute work might do this song more justice..Great song writting skills..Awesome lyrics...
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