Hashaot wrote…

Nice mix, interesting layers, I like the wideness of the elements, and the subtle delays.

ktartandude wrote…

Pretty cool sound for the first half of the song. At about 2 mins, I felt the vocals and guitar were competing a little. After that, the long guitar solo to the end- didnt enjoy that part too much. I feel that if you were to restructure the song, with a short solo at 2 mins then with another verse, chorus,chorus or something, it could be a really good song.

Fiddlah wrote…

I really think this song was put together very well. I really like the mix. Everything sounds in the right place i.e.: keys, drums, bass, solo and the vocals are excellent. You've got a nice commercial sounding piece here. I really enjoyed listening to this. The only thing I could recommend is to bring the solo forward just a tad towards the very ending and I personally would have faded the solo out so that it ends with the rest of the song, but thats just me. As it is the solo gives the impression that it was recorded as an overlay, other than that, Great composition!
 Oh yes, and the lyrics are excellent!!!   Thank you for sharing!!!!
 Fid

Jiminuk wrote…

I think the song is great! 

OK, good stuff out the way - for some reason it sounds a little messy in my headphones, and missing some brightness in the accompanying instrumentation.  The voice shines through really well, but there's not enough separation in the rest of the music for me.  Oh, and I here some clipping in there too.

Back to the good stuff then... I really like the construction; thought the playing was very good; and enjoyed the vocal delivery and lyrics.

If this were tidied up a bit it would be an excellent song.
 :)