#1May 25th, 2009 · 06:26 PM
13 threads / 12 songs
38 posts
United States of America
Paper Child
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#2May 28th, 2009 · 12:57 PM
121 threads / 56 songs
3,098 posts
Netherlands
heh nice song! Well there's a bunch of production issues. It's all mono! That's too bad because you've got quite some instruments there and they should get their seperate room to do them good justice. I like the style and the structure of the song, and the lyrics are quite good too. It reminds me of something but I can't tell what it is exactly.

Anyway you really gotta mix in stereo! And give every instrument sufficient presence and then a little bit of tightening up the play and there ya are!
#3May 29th, 2009 · 12:12 AM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
Im with Px..Song has great potential aside from having a good hook here and there too..Theres also some timing issues between drums and guitars...Wheres the bass?That would give it a real warm sound too and completeness..Anyways good one indeed!
#4June 24th, 2010 · 06:17 PM
176 threads / 26 songs
2,342 posts
United Kingdom
re: Paper Child
saw u online and decided to check out your songs .......
u have great lyrics ...........
Lou better look out on delivery.......
love it ............

write/post more please

poetry in motion ........stories in song
glad to have found this
i vote 90% plus

fish with a smile on his gills
#5June 25th, 2010 · 10:45 AM
13 threads / 12 songs
38 posts
United States of America
I'm happy you enjoyed it, it's a really old song and I actually have tweaked it a little for my live shows since I know it can be a little long with three verses and choruses. I also can see why that can be a pain since I didn't really change it up in any of those but at least I reward patience for a good break at the end. God I haven't been on here in ages, but I'll try to put something up eventually. if not there's always www.polydactylrecords.blogspot.com
later
#6July 2nd, 2010 · 05:05 PM
176 threads / 26 songs
2,342 posts
United Kingdom
re: re: Paper Child
swordfish wrote…
saw u online and decided to check out your songs .......
u have great lyrics ...........
Lou better look out on delivery.......
love it ............

write/post more please

poetry in motion ........stories in song
glad to have found this
i vote 90% plus

fish with a smile on his gills
To review swordfish stuff goto  http://swordfish.bandamp.com/music.html
#7July 3rd, 2010 · 05:21 PM
341 threads / 59 songs
4,361 posts
Cymru (Wales)
A few recording issues here and there, I liked the rhythm thing even if it's not done perfectly on this recording.
It's quite catchy, I'd love to hear this now, live.
Some very drastic tuning issues towards the end, I take it they are smoothed out these days.
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