heh nice song! Well there's a bunch of production issues. It's all mono! That's too bad because you've got quite some instruments there and they should get their seperate room to do them good justice. I like the style and the structure of the song, and the lyrics are quite good too. It reminds me of something but I can't tell what it is exactly.
Anyway you really gotta mix in stereo! And give every instrument sufficient presence and then a little bit of tightening up the play and there ya are!
Anyway you really gotta mix in stereo! And give every instrument sufficient presence and then a little bit of tightening up the play and there ya are!
re: Paper Child |
plug5 wrote…
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u have great lyrics ...........
Lou better look out on delivery.......
love it ............
write/post more please
poetry in motion ........stories in song
glad to have found this
i vote 90% plus
fish with a smile on his gills
I'm happy you enjoyed it, it's a really old song and I actually have tweaked it a little for my live shows since I know it can be a little long with three verses and choruses. I also can see why that can be a pain since I didn't really change it up in any of those but at least I reward patience for a good break at the end. God I haven't been on here in ages, but I'll try to put something up eventually. if not there's always www.polydactylrecords.blogspot.com
later
later
re: re: Paper Child |
swordfish wrote…
saw u online and decided to check out your songs .......plug5 wrote…
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u have great lyrics ...........
Lou better look out on delivery.......
love it ............
write/post more please
poetry in motion ........stories in song
glad to have found this
i vote 90% plus
fish with a smile on his gills
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