Everyone my band has played this song for has loved it I hope you guys do to

 

Take a step…in my shoes

What difference does it make?

One in all…all the same

Waiting for change…nothing here but pain

I am nothing more than a seed…my blood runs cold

I am nothing more, wait and see…Watch me, Watch me as I grow

Find the demon seed

I am a new breed

You’re still haunting me

 

Watch the rain as it falls

Floods my memories

Cold and sick…mouth is dry

Hands are shaking

Life is a hazard to me…caution to all

We are all supreme

Self destructs…watch it as, watch it as. Watch it as it blows

But watch me as I grow

Find the demon seed

I am a new breed

You’re still haunting me

 

Take a step…in my shoes

What difference does it make?

One in all…all the same

Waiting for change…nothing here but pain

Is this your first audio up?i know you post a lot on the audio section but never saw an actual song from you..Well got to say sounds very good..Theres some issues with the vox eq IMHO as at times your vox gets a bit lost..Its lacking a bit of mids ...The guitars are way to big frequency wise meaning there covering a lot of sounds spac,e making your mix a bit cluttered with extra noise..I think you can run a deesser and maybe kill some of the extra frequencies giving it a tighter feel...

yeah this is actually I'll keep that in mind thanks

LoL taking dissonance to new heights! It's pretty radical really - however I'd certainly do something with the vox... heavy modulation or distortion and so - they're so clean now, against the heavy background they stand out very well, but I'd really - seing the lyrics - go for something far more "out there" just like the music is. But that's just me. The overall soundscape sounds suitable for alternative bars and clubs so thats all ok there. Well I'm not listening through headphones so I can't comment on the mix too much, I am impressed with the creativity here but yeah there's still lots to grow!

I think the vox sound okay clean. Some effects, as PX mentions, may work but I have no problem with them as they are. The real stand out point for me is with the guitars. I like the chaotic, dissonant parts but I think they would be more effective if, during the riffing parts, the left and right guitars were a lot tighter. As it is, they kind of melt together in a blur of sound, which is okay for the other parts but a tight, stomping togetherness in the riff is required, to my ears anyway.
Quite a good song but needs some polish I think.

This song was recorded at our second time in the recording studio so the guitarist was a little nervous. The rest sounds pretty tight. The music sounds alot better live I will say that but recordings can offer us so much more especially for other people listening to us. We've been getting alot of friends on myspace so I think we're doing something right but it could use some tweaking. I have one more song I could upload if anyone would want to hear it just let me know if you do

very radical! i love it!!! cool job here.
great first upload. awsome stuff and keep rocking

yeah, please do!

Ok as soon as I get off of work tonight I will upload my bands other song for you guys to hear. If you like what you hear you can always check out my band's myspace at www.myspace.com/549music If you like us then please add us as a friend we can use all the friends we can get and it would mean alot to have fellow musicians as friends.

I gave this a rating..for some reason it registered a lower
% then the rating I gave

Thats ok at least you rated it

i like these confuse guitar parts! very cool!

I'm glad you like it