Catharsis |
here it is as promised the full version, theres a few bits i'm not too happy with but as ever windows sound recorder is not the tool for the job and i couldn't take starting the entire piece over again for every mistake in there...so theres a few, but you get the general feel of it.
hope you enjoy it, and if you voted for the old one i hope you'll switch your vote to this one if you find time, but if not no worries, i put the songs up for the feedback not because i think they have a chance of winning
well enjoy (i hope)
hope you enjoy it, and if you voted for the old one i hope you'll switch your vote to this one if you find time, but if not no worries, i put the songs up for the feedback not because i think they have a chance of winning
well enjoy (i hope)
I like it - but could do with vocals. Search on google for a program called audacity. Its a free sound recording and editing program which is far better than sound recorder!
Scara is right, move away from sound recorder, it's ok for quick little loops, but once you wanna start pinning full tracks together you need something a little better... Get audacity and see if you carry on getting into your recording, if you do i would recomend investing in, or downloading cakewalk guitar tracks pro or something similar, that way you can get into editing out your mistakes (not that i could hear alot of them) and some multi tracking... Very nice piece though, i would never have the bhottle to even attempt fingerstyle classical, and you seem some nice tecqs on here... Keep it up!
(also, cakewalk would allow you to get rid of the high end static you get in some parts of the song)
(also, cakewalk would allow you to get rid of the high end static you get in some parts of the song)
nice work man!!!!
like it a lot.... makes me remember Mood For a Day, from Yes ( u may know it) with Steve Howe o guitars....is the same style; an instrumental accoustic ( in ur case and electric with semi-acoustic sound) but the idea is quite similar: play and flameco-influenced song... like ur job!
but man, get a good program to record...the sound is no the best...
ohhh, almost for get, try to make some "pass" from some structure to another: in some part it feel the songs is cut and began another. that my only musically critiq.
and a question, do u have any sort of guitar study, or classes???
like it a lot.... makes me remember Mood For a Day, from Yes ( u may know it) with Steve Howe o guitars....is the same style; an instrumental accoustic ( in ur case and electric with semi-acoustic sound) but the idea is quite similar: play and flameco-influenced song... like ur job!
but man, get a good program to record...the sound is no the best...
ohhh, almost for get, try to make some "pass" from some structure to another: in some part it feel the songs is cut and began another. that my only musically critiq.
and a question, do u have any sort of guitar study, or classes???
Nice guitar work! I agree with the others that Sound Recorder is not worthy of your ability. However, another way you might consider having some real fun if you got like $300 to spare is to invest in the Boss Looping Station. You can create an infinate # of loops and make it sound as though you have an entire band playing although it is just yourself! Keep rockin'!
ah! the day has come! i loved this song anyway, and now it's even better.
audacity is definitely a nice choice. find the LAME_ENC.dll though so that you can encode to mp3 straight from audacity. asside from that, i don't have many suggestions!
the lead guitar's sound is perfect, and the varying key is well implamented. i give cudos to you, good sir, for making sound recorder make something like this. i would have shot myself with a staple gun and then hung myself with a toaster cord before i would have make it work as well as you have made it.
nice job, keep going with this sort of stuff! it makes easy listening, well, easy! au voir, to all.
audacity is definitely a nice choice. find the LAME_ENC.dll though so that you can encode to mp3 straight from audacity. asside from that, i don't have many suggestions!
the lead guitar's sound is perfect, and the varying key is well implamented. i give cudos to you, good sir, for making sound recorder make something like this. i would have shot myself with a staple gun and then hung myself with a toaster cord before i would have make it work as well as you have made it.
nice job, keep going with this sort of stuff! it makes easy listening, well, easy! au voir, to all.
it lacks true cool |
well, the guitar is nice and does a lot, but it needs more, possibly consider doing some vocals when you are doing those triads, nice chord progressions.
keep up the good work, you get a Not bad.
keep up the good work, you get a Not bad.
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