I just made this song couple of days ago. Don't ask for better recording plz all I have is a PC mic (lol) and an acoustic guitar. I'm sure it would be way better with better recording and of course some drums.

It's Ok as an acoustic track, hmm some percussion would be nice,
Just your timing goes out, do you have the facility to record with a click track, or use a percussion loop, thats what I would have done.
The vox is low in the mix, perhaps record those seperate.

nice work, i like your guitar playing style. good take...but with more recording takes and stuff im sure you can get the levels and eq adjusted nicely. good job!

I really like this,
It builds up nicely into a really swinging song.

I do want a better recording though ! lol
Not because of the recording quality because it's good for a pc mic, but I do think you could tighten and tidy the performance a bit, dont get me wrong it is tight and I certainly couldn't play like that, but because a 'perfect' rendition of this would get every one on their feet dancing, they'd have no good reason not to. 

This is a better version of this song -> http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/7335.html