This ones very basic...A taster should i say...you cant beat a bit of Enya...quaint, dont you think? This needs a lot more work now the vocal stretching is done, and the extra arm on my head ive been growing to help me on the task is almost ready....the old girls going to get such a good slap...

i'd either put the vocals a little louder, or the bass beat down a bit, either way, so that the vocals are more prominent.  not too much though!  it's a little long and drawn out...  i keep waiting for it to break out into something completely different.

overall it's very nice, though.  you didn't overkill it, which is good.  keep it up, yah?

try gating the vocals can beat gated vocals... will help with the beat