Lyrics originally made by Landon, but modified by Avatos. And guitar made by Avatos. A little rough, but it's to show the idea.

Any comment is welcome... And suggestions to record it right, and cheap...

Hope you enjoy it.

Godspeed.

Cool...toasty also makes guitars!
It needs a second guitar and a better recording.
The guitar is mega loud and distorted but the vocal is nearly spoken and clean, maybe you could scream a bit more , compress it and effect it to be 'on the same level' as the guitar.

Sounds like you recorded live? It's an art to get the mic placements, plenty experimenting will get you there.
Record the vox seperate.
Welcome to bandAMP

Yeah. Needs a tad bit of work, but so do most songs. your voice needs to be at the same level as the guitar. Just keep working around with it and experimenting.

This is rough.............

needs organisation ...........drums and more!!!!!

fish

OK GET THIS TOGETHER...........

Welcome to the amp...
Yeah stick around and ask questions..
Your in need of some recording suggestions..The song is pretty cool just needs a little more instrumentation..
So yeah check out some of the other forums for feedback on recording ,software and stuff...

I find very useful your ideas and comments, it definitely is a rough version of the song, it has a lot of recording issues, but that's why I could use suggestions to record, and maybe your thoughts about the song itself...

Godspeed,

Adamantem.