#1April 23rd, 2009 · 04:22 AM
77 threads / 31 songs
353 posts
Norway
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This song is not in a battle


It's not really a song.. I had these two lines of lyrics repeating in my head, and I felt like I had to record it.
Tell me what you think!

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#2April 23rd, 2009 · 06:36 AM
77 threads / 31 songs
353 posts
Norway
Lyrics:
All you've said
and all you've heard
It makes you think
of all you've learned

All you hear
and all you say
is leading me to a better day...

 
#3April 23rd, 2009 · 09:13 AM
30 threads / 25 songs
219 posts
United States of America
Hello Kine,
  I would most certainly call this piece a "song".  You have a great concept here and the lyrics are perfect. If you wanted to build on it you have a rock solid foundation with what you have here. Otherwise it's just right the way it is!
Great vocals and harmonies! and the simplicity actually enhances the  meaning of the lyrics. If you wanted to build on it,,, just one thing come to mind,,,, maybe add some nice keys  or strings at the end when it builds..... *I really think this song could be great huge sing along with a dynamic chorus as it builds at the end.
 *very very nice!  *Enjoyed it very much!
John
aka: fiddlah
#4April 28th, 2009 · 09:12 PM
2 threads / 2 songs
6 posts
United States of America
Very funny, I was thinking the exact same thing as fiddlah. I can see a bunch of strings come in. I like the whole build up, could use some drums that come crashing in at the end. Sounds like a modern folk song about someone special for sure. Good idea!
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