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It's not really a song.. I had these two lines of lyrics repeating in my head, and I felt like I had to record it.
Tell me what you think!
Tell me what you think!
Hello Kine,
I would most certainly call this piece a "song". You have a great concept here and the lyrics are perfect. If you wanted to build on it you have a rock solid foundation with what you have here. Otherwise it's just right the way it is!
Great vocals and harmonies! and the simplicity actually enhances the meaning of the lyrics. If you wanted to build on it,,, just one thing come to mind,,,, maybe add some nice keys or strings at the end when it builds..... *I really think this song could be great huge sing along with a dynamic chorus as it builds at the end.
*very very nice! *Enjoyed it very much!
John
aka: fiddlah
I would most certainly call this piece a "song". You have a great concept here and the lyrics are perfect. If you wanted to build on it you have a rock solid foundation with what you have here. Otherwise it's just right the way it is!
Great vocals and harmonies! and the simplicity actually enhances the meaning of the lyrics. If you wanted to build on it,,, just one thing come to mind,,,, maybe add some nice keys or strings at the end when it builds..... *I really think this song could be great huge sing along with a dynamic chorus as it builds at the end.
*very very nice! *Enjoyed it very much!
John
aka: fiddlah
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