#1April 22nd, 2009 · 05:42 AM
77 threads / 31 songs
353 posts
Norway
Smokes and Bananas
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This song is not in a battle


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All you take
is smokes and bananas
You're the word "silence"
I can barely hear you breath

Summers moving
You rest your head on me
Your well kept secrets
is now haunting you

Your well kept secrets
is now haunting you...

The sunshine in you
is all I can think of
You light up the darkness
of the life I live

This feeling you give
it makes me feel so good
You are the only
And I was so lonely

You are the sunshine in my life...


You are the answer if you like my game
You are the answer if you like my name...

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#2April 22nd, 2009 · 09:23 AM
30 threads / 25 songs
219 posts
United States of America
Beautiful vocals, Kine~!
 I noticed you are quite the lyricist/poet. Very impressed with the simplicity and elegance of your talent.
You play that guitar as if is meant to be. The Dobro in the backround compliments it perfectly and your vocals are beautifully graceful *Thank you for sharing this lovely piece!
 Just a tip.... I heard you sing the word "haunting"   *it's misspelled in your posted lyrics. *just thought I'd help you out on that. Other then that, beautiful song  *Great Job~!,
 John
aka: Fiddlah
#3April 22nd, 2009 · 09:29 AM
77 threads / 31 songs
353 posts
Norway
Thanx
#4April 22nd, 2009 · 11:31 AM
21 threads
235 posts
United Kingdom
Nice melodies. I like the vocal harmonies as well. The song's a very sweet one.
Well played.
#5April 22nd, 2009 · 12:39 PM
121 threads / 56 songs
3,098 posts
Netherlands
Fantastic song, a sober tone like early Leonard Cohen, with equally compelling lyrics (yet from your unique perspective ofcourse), a minimal arrangement and - so complete. Really great!
#6April 22nd, 2009 · 03:02 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,394 posts
United Kingdom
This is the best song I've heard from you. Everything sounds just great.
I like the feel of the song the most.
You know I like it when you harmonize your vox, it really brings out the colour in your vocal tones.

WELL DONE!!
#7April 23rd, 2009 · 01:39 PM
102 threads / 59 songs
204 posts
Canada
Really nice song. Eerie and soulful. Great arrangements, love the slide and the when the vocals double. Great lyrics too. All in all great work. I like that you don't end on the tonic, always good to hear a song that makes you just want to hear more. Very nice.
#8May 3rd, 2009 · 05:33 AM
46 threads / 33 songs
179 posts
United States of America
This is my favorite of all ur songs
#9September 10th, 2011 · 12:28 PM
189 threads / 27 songs
2,834 posts
Germany
added this song to my favorites.
Can we expect more of your musical ideas?
#10September 12th, 2011 · 10:48 AM
32 threads / 28 songs
201 posts
United States of America
This is so pretty...

Reminds me a lot of Denison Witmer's earliest albums (still my favorites). Has a perfect mix of happiness and sadness. Man... can't say enough how much I'm enjoying this.

Please post more like it.
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