Well this is our first song in its rough draft form.  There are several problems with it but we would like your input.
1: there is only one guitar part still need to write another for jesse
2: the guitar is flat because the singer decided to tune to drop D without a tuner present and never got it back right
3: vocal quality isnt great

lol. great jam here! this is actually a pretty cool song! this singer did a pretty good job. work on timing, get the instruments in tune, and just mess around until you find a quality that is good for you!

cool work!

There are a lot of isuues.. as you mentioned...
Like Kanadian said..keep working on it...thats the only way to improve..stay with it