Gonna be re-doing this one with a little less Jim morrison in there...

this about the ppl who brave the croud in the Jack? wtg m8

Not bad there mate. I like the sounds especially from the keyboard. The recording is excellent. One thing that I think is letting you down could be the lack of dynamics and a a fairly repetitive drum beat. Vocals tend to get a bit lost behind the reverb in sections. Try to emphasize the key changes into the chorus and stuff like that, make them a point of interest. Keep it up champ!

Interesting - I actually liked this tune better than Kaleidoscope, the one you enterred for June.  That one struck me very similar to Bruce Springstein, while I think you did well with adopting this one to sound more like the Doors, who I am very much a fan of.  Good work.  Your recording quality is pretty good over all, but I do agree with a lot of things stavros said.  Loved the ending.  Rock on man!

nice job man, very profesional, not my style, but te song is pretty good! keep o Dooring, lol!

I agree with all of the above, And I dig it a lot, love the doors, and you do need a bit more of Jack  , just joking

Cheers

Rod

Nice job, man.  You've captured the Doors meets the Eels in this one.  I like it.

Marg

The only Doors song I know is 'People Are Strange'  I made a point of avoiding their stuff...
I really quite like this tho
well done

Never heard Doors, but a cool song anyhoo . I rekon the beginning bit would make a great ska song! Try it someday 

I'd say you definately managed to capture the Doors feeling on this track! It's not bad, but I think the drums let it down a bit. Writing drum patterns can be a pain in the arse escpecially when all you want to do is get down to buisness with other instruments (at least, I always found that), but I think that at the end of the day it makes a difference.

Hey man

I think the production on this track is hurting you the most, it is very flat and not easy to distinguish the instruments, everything is muddled together. I also agree that you should change the drumbeat to add some spice to the song. Find a more appropriate effect for your guitar in the soloing as well, it seems really out of place with all the chorus on there, it just doesn't fit, a raw distortion without much chorus or reverb would do alot for the sound.

Craig

This song was interesting...your singing kind of sounds like the doors...and i like the doors...so i thought you did a good job with this

maybe you could have been more original, or just simply cover the doors...
Anyway this was a well-made production.

You know im never happy with my performances and it allways gets so late...but i was impressed with what you got out of the night and how calm you remain trying to get me to do what im supposed to do......you can hear the evolution......man. Jobs a good un.

I just had a Jim Morrison flashback...deff  a Doors sound here..and thats a good thing Spoon.....


Ralph