#1June 26th, 2005 · 07:43 PM
8 threads / 3 songs
102 posts
United Kingdom
The fearless few
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Score: 54.7%
Rank: 47th
Battle: 2005-07


Gonna be re-doing this one with a little less Jim morrison in there...

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#2June 26th, 2005 · 08:10 PM
9 threads / 4 songs
90 posts
United Kingdom
heheh....
this about the ppl who brave the croud in the Jack? wtg m8
#3June 27th, 2005 · 08:48 PM
8 threads / 7 songs
113 posts
Australia
Not bad there mate. I like the sounds especially from the keyboard. The recording is excellent. One thing that I think is letting you down could be the lack of dynamics and a a fairly repetitive drum beat. Vocals tend to get a bit lost behind the reverb in sections. Try to emphasize the key changes into the chorus and stuff like that, make them a point of interest. Keep it up champ!
#4June 28th, 2005 · 11:24 AM
3 threads / 1 songs
94 posts
United States of America
Interesting - I actually liked this tune better than Kaleidoscope, the one you enterred for June.  That one struck me very similar to Bruce Springstein, while I think you did well with adopting this one to sound more like the Doors, who I am very much a fan of.  Good work.  Your recording quality is pretty good over all, but I do agree with a lot of things stavros said.  Loved the ending.  Rock on man!
#5June 28th, 2005 · 11:31 AM
117 threads / 55 songs
1,541 posts
Chile
Very Doors!
nice job man, very profesional, not my style, but te song is pretty good! keep o Dooring, lol!
#6June 29th, 2005 · 12:47 AM
7 threads / 7 songs
23 posts
Venezuela
very good
I agree with all of the above, And I dig it a lot, love the doors, and you do need a bit more of Jack  , just joking

Cheers

Rod
#7June 29th, 2005 · 05:04 AM
4 threads / 2 songs
45 posts
Canada
Nice job, man.  You've captured the Doors meets the Eels in this one.  I like it.

Marg
#8June 29th, 2005 · 06:31 AM
117 threads / 88 songs
256 posts
United Kingdom
The only Doors song I know is 'People Are Strange'  I made a point of avoiding their stuff...
I really quite like this tho
well done
#9July 2nd, 2005 · 12:31 PM
8 threads / 6 songs
29 posts
United Kingdom
Never heard Doors, but a cool song anyhoo . I rekon the beginning bit would make a great ska song! Try it someday 
#10July 6th, 2005 · 12:52 AM
31 threads / 5 songs
178 posts
Spain
I'd say you definately managed to capture the Doors feeling on this track! It's not bad, but I think the drums let it down a bit. Writing drum patterns can be a pain in the arse escpecially when all you want to do is get down to buisness with other instruments (at least, I always found that), but I think that at the end of the day it makes a difference.
#11July 10th, 2005 · 12:57 AM
1 threads / 1 songs
23 posts
Austria
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Hey man

I think the production on this track is hurting you the most, it is very flat and not easy to distinguish the instruments, everything is muddled together. I also agree that you should change the drumbeat to add some spice to the song. Find a more appropriate effect for your guitar in the soloing as well, it seems really out of place with all the chorus on there, it just doesn't fit, a raw distortion without much chorus or reverb would do alot for the sound.

Craig
#12July 24th, 2005 · 08:57 AM
3 threads / 3 songs
24 posts
United States of America
This song was interesting...your singing kind of sounds like the doors...and i like the doors...so i thought you did a good job with this
#13July 25th, 2005 · 12:25 AM
4 posts
Italy
maybe you could have been more original, or just simply cover the doors...
Anyway this was a well-made production.
#14July 26th, 2005 · 06:45 AM
20 threads / 18 songs
93 posts
United Kingdom
You know im never happy with my performances and it allways gets so late...but i was impressed with what you got out of the night and how calm you remain trying to get me to do what im supposed to do......you can hear the evolution......man. Jobs a good un.
#15June 25th, 2006 · 07:12 AM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
hi
I just had a Jim Morrison flashback...deff  a Doors sound here..and thats a good thing Spoon.....


Ralph
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