#1April 13th, 2009 · 08:42 AM
77 threads / 31 songs
353 posts
Norway
Somedays
*

This song is not in a battle


Somedays I cry
wondering why the clouds are grey.
They went down
with the sun
and the moon.

Somedays, somedays I find the way.

Somedays I gaze
up to the stage to find myself.
I am bold,
so I'm told.
I must go
to find the gold.

Somedays, somedays I find the way.

Somedays I stare
at the air that surrounds my soul.
I can't see
what's in me.
They can flee
and so can we.

Somedays, somedays I fly away.

Somedays I cry
wondering why the clouds are grey.
They went down
with the sun
and the moon...


Somedays, somedays I fly away.
Aaaahhh....
Aaaahhh....
Aaaaaahhh......

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#2April 13th, 2009 · 11:39 AM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,394 posts
United Kingdom
Hey Kine how ya doin', it's been a while.

Nice emotion, I do like it when you harmonise, very nice.

Keep 'em comin'

Denis
#3April 13th, 2009 · 01:18 PM
4 threads / 3 songs
75 posts
United States of America
Right on Kine. I like your tune. Try putting quite a bit more hi end on your recording. Very hard to discern your lyrics on this low level recording. A high shelf will help that and crispin up the git also.
#4April 14th, 2009 · 12:34 PM
121 threads / 56 songs
3,098 posts
Netherlands
Wow this is a wonderful track, minimalist guitar part, very original structure, great lyrics and very catching vocal melody. Harmonies are superb, the whole track I was transported back to the attic of my childhood where I played with the phonograph and my parents singles collection. I can't recall the artists and maybe it's partly because of your production quality (not polished but definately adequate) - well... I could almost smell the vinyl. Lollllll

Anyway, yeah. Downloaded this tune, and it's great to see you back. As a matter of fact, I recently wondered where you'd gone to, so it's extra nice to see you again!

And maybe you are interested in participating in the BandAMP video collab (see front page) - would love your voice in there!

cheers..
#5April 20th, 2009 · 06:07 PM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
As usual great work with the vocals. Always glad to see you around...
Check your PM...
#6April 22nd, 2009 · 10:29 AM
30 threads / 25 songs
219 posts
United States of America
Extremely unique and original, *beautiful harmonies as well. This reminds me of the creativity and originality of the 1960's early rock progression. Simple but yet very powerful in both music composition and lyrics.
 I am very pleased and honored to have heard your input here. Please keep sharing the awesome talent you have.
 *simply beautiful piece  *thank you, Kine
John
aka: Fiddlah
#7April 22nd, 2009 · 12:18 PM
77 threads / 31 songs
353 posts
Norway
Thank you guys
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