Maybe somebody else would desacribe it better than me. I like the structure, I think is pretty solid.

Hey man, I like the song.  You should do more fingerwork, you seem to have a good grasp of the technique.  Keep it up.

I like it, but it will be a lot better if you put some gipsy rythms into the song...It sounds like medieval chords...very good!!!

very nice picking but it seems abit flat with just one single guitar, maybe u could add some drums and bass and eventually lyrics? just needs developing basically lol also the recording is abit too quiet.

Hey... Liked this one alot... dowloaded it....  Check your mailbox.. I pm'ed ya.... 

   Anyway.. this is really cool... somehow I missed it before....

                 Jim "da noodle king" K
                http://thenoodleking.com

A good start. Best to make a choice though and figure out what direction you want to take this. You could make something nice out of it classically, or you could develop something more structured in terms of verse and chorus and whatnot. I like it, sort of a Yes feel with the progression and the change to picking but the constant strumming gets boring. Try and figure out what it is you think you're actually trying to express with the music and write a melody that supports it. Great start though.

Yeeaah man, really good song.You have tallant and you play very good.Keep going!

I can tell the playing is good, but I also think you're fantasic on piano. I agree about more strumming variation...