I decided to write this song one night when i was really depressed (btw first song ive ever written) so tell me what ya think

Gives me a "Hurt" by Johnny Cash feel.
cool guitar....great job for your first song man.

I really like the chord progressions you have. they sound great.

Your singing is pretty good, but I think your singing a little too high than you need to...I have a problem with this.
just try and bring it down a little bit but still keep the original feeling.

other than that this sounds great man! awesome job.

First song ever written eh, nice one then.

I like the guitar progression but I agree with Kunadiun about the vox, sounds like you're singing too high for your voice. Maybe a normal speech pitch would be better, like what you're headed towards at the end of the song. But it's sure a really decent first song, grats!

Great for your first song, pretty reasonable recording, although the overall level is too low, you should be able to easily raise/normalise it using software. You could still sing in this key, try warming up your vocals before you record for at least half an hour, just let it all out and feel the song as best as you can.

The vox need to come up in the mix, I normally record the acoustic in stereo panning about 50% keeping the vox in the center.

The guitar rhythm is nice, the lead has some timing problems, try playing less or play around the rhythm leaving some space.

Very good for your first song. Well Done!!!

Denis

GOOD JOB (period) not much else i can say suits the style well