#1March 23rd, 2009 · 01:28 AM
151 threads / 150 songs
265 posts
United States of America
Flowers Sprout
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This song is not in a battle


Trying a more riff-driven approach to writing.

Unfortunatley this made writing verses really hard, so I just left them out.

Chorus:
Flowers sprout from people's mouths when they tell you lies.
Echoes from the tyrants past, they come as no surprise.

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#2March 23rd, 2009 · 02:46 AM
117 threads / 54 songs
3,065 posts
Netherlands
Sure, write a song with no verses! LMAO

Anyway, it really does sound pretty decent (for as far as this here laptop allows me to judge it). Nice and heavy - kinda makes me think of the Smashing Pumpkins. I like it, even without verses. If you can ever think of verses this will turn into a real song and from what I can tell, sure has "hit potential". Welll I'm giving you a good grade for what you have so far... lOl
#3March 23rd, 2009 · 04:14 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,371 posts
United Kingdom
Not so sure of the intro, maybe thin out a bit more to give the effect, which will give a more dramatic effect to the main.

The vox and guitar riffs are nice.

I would have perhaps just had an instrumental inplace if the riff's

Yeah nice and heavy sound indeed.

Denis
#4March 23rd, 2009 · 06:50 PM
66 threads / 55 songs
697 posts
United States of America
This sounds great. I tend to like the single-verse tracks.

So the vocal parts sound great. Mix is overall good.

My only comments on the mix (and this is merely a subtlety), is that the drums oppose the guitars. In other words, the drums sound really clean and high while the guitars are grungy and have that slightly muffled tone, a little less presence. Both sounds are good, but you might consider mixing them in the future to get a more similar sound. It will make it sound more like they're connected as a whole.

I really like this song.
#5March 24th, 2009 · 06:01 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
Flowers Sprout
You might be on to something Theotherguy89...a song with just a chorus..it does work with this composition...I'm not one to give any advice about mixing...1st time I have ever heard a song  with the intro being the chorus...Nice work..good creativity...

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