A rough recording of a new song.


Lyrics

Girl, You're just a kid. And you don't know,
Who you are dealing with. Time will pass by.
Make you wiser, and leave you behind.

Friend, it is time to learn,
The most important lesson.
Please, leave your heart behind.

Chorus
Whatever happens, happens.
Don't you forget.
Whatever happens, happens.
The kind of people...
The kind of people you're with.

I won't let go of my dreams or my hopes,
Until you make me; Until you make me.

Until it's necessary.
Until it's mandatory.
Until I'm not a child no more.

Chorus
Whatever happens, happens.
Don't you forget.
Whatever happens, happens.
The kind of people you meet.

This looks like it may be a cool place to hang for a while. Looking fwd to a production of this one.

I like the build up musically, even though it's a rough and early draft.  The guitar kind of leads you to what else may occur.  Decent but simple addition of bass.  Obvious need for drums in this, and I guess they'll be added as and when you can.
But the real beauty of this song is the vocal delivery... gritty, punchy where needed, and with tons of feeling.  Great stuff.

Thank you guys!

Trying to get a band together to fully develop songs. Otherwise it is going to be a drum machine

Your a great singer man. You've got the dirty crisp something-ness in your voice that just really makes it super awesome. you've got skillz man.

If you get a band together your gonna make it so big. You could even make it big on your own.
I noticed also that you have really great quality in your songs. What are you using to record?

Great voice. Great guitar.

@TheKunadiun: Thanks a lot man. Very uplifting to hear those words.
This particular song I think was a small-diag condenser pointing at the 12th fret(Trekstar chinese mic from ebay), and line in from my ovation mixed together. Bass is direct in, and vocals through a large diag condenser from Apex.

All low budget :p

Now I mostly do Apex mic for vocals, Naiant X-Q on guitar, bass direct in. All through sonar.