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From the debut album "Luminum". THought I'd put this up and get your feedback. Thanks and be well.
-Art Of Being
-Art Of Being
i like |
i really like this song. all the instruments are well balanced, and the vocals sound great. great harmonys. i also love the lead break. its not to fussy, i would have probably liked it with a bit less distortion though. it would have suited the feel of the song better. overall very professional.
great song!
great song!
Drums |
Casas wrote…
a beautiful melody really. and i like the solo, reminds me of some Pixies' stuff.
the vocals are very good. but maybe the drums need some work.
The only weakness right now as far as band members is, I dont have a drummer! so I have to make do with a drum machine...I know, drum machines have no soul. Hope the song lyrics and maybe the guitar help to overshadow the drum drawbacks. Thanks for listening ya'll, you have no idea how important these comments are for me. Keep them coming! Be well-AOB
a pretty good recording, though a little low-tech...
yeah, consensus building: drums need a little work.
might be nice to add some textures, too, besides the srummed guitar - have you heard any Bruce Cockburn from the 1970s? He had this great violinist named Hugh Marsh who added a totally different dimension to the music... just kept it interesting playing counter-melodies and stufff. It is a good song, and it's nicely put togethr, but I'd just try and mix it up a little...
yeah, consensus building: drums need a little work.
might be nice to add some textures, too, besides the srummed guitar - have you heard any Bruce Cockburn from the 1970s? He had this great violinist named Hugh Marsh who added a totally different dimension to the music... just kept it interesting playing counter-melodies and stufff. It is a good song, and it's nicely put togethr, but I'd just try and mix it up a little...
It's a very good song, the vocals are good and the melody is nice. I like the guitar solo for the playin but I think it must be better by using a more natural and warm sound. I think the song need a change in some point somewhere, not only the drums but it's still a good song.
I like the lyrics ;-)
I like the lyrics ;-)
Heard your newest song before this one. This is much better man! Dont care about the drummer. I even dont have one. Your voice is very melodical and sensitive. Id like to hear more of this
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