What Are You Doing? w.Vox |
What Are You Doing? With my vocals. Yea... this is not spamming, the other one was an instruemental and was kinda a mistake so w.e Well here's my vocals as promised, I know it's not best around, but I feel confident about the lyrics of this song. Yea... in the other one, you guys were talking about doing the vocals, because I know for certain I can't scream and belt well... so If anybody wants to re-do the vocals, I would be glad to hear it. Just PM me and give the instrumental. Here's the lyrics again lol.
Yea I suggest using headphones, because the guitar's amp were close to the amp, it kinda creates this subwoffer thing effect. It's cool, it vibrates the headphones just a bit. Don't worry, they wont break, it so subtle i like it!
v1
Every night he lies in his bed
with nothing taken to the head
dreaming what can happen next
thinking what else can he wreck?
v2
slowly cutting his strings away
acting as the predator and prey
who never risk that jump
stuck inside that harmless trap... so afraid
c
What You're doing passing by
all these rooms that make you cry
let it out, but don't let time fly you by
Can't you see the rusted key
that you hold and open and drives
why don't you? just take that one only ride
v3
Dreaming of a treasure appears
opened, nothing but empty years
he wonders, why there is no gold
realized he shivers in cold
v4
So afraid
that he has nothing to give
How can he drive
Hiding
behind the unwritten slate
How can he see... so afraid
B/T
wake up, life's not a dream anymore
stop wasting time and open that door
because this is all you'll ever have
get up, the world's leaving you behind
better run fast, and follow a line
because this is all you'll ever have
Yea I suggest using headphones, because the guitar's amp were close to the amp, it kinda creates this subwoffer thing effect. It's cool, it vibrates the headphones just a bit. Don't worry, they wont break, it so subtle i like it!
v1
Every night he lies in his bed
with nothing taken to the head
dreaming what can happen next
thinking what else can he wreck?
v2
slowly cutting his strings away
acting as the predator and prey
who never risk that jump
stuck inside that harmless trap... so afraid
c
What You're doing passing by
all these rooms that make you cry
let it out, but don't let time fly you by
Can't you see the rusted key
that you hold and open and drives
why don't you? just take that one only ride
v3
Dreaming of a treasure appears
opened, nothing but empty years
he wonders, why there is no gold
realized he shivers in cold
v4
So afraid
that he has nothing to give
How can he drive
Hiding
behind the unwritten slate
How can he see... so afraid
B/T
wake up, life's not a dream anymore
stop wasting time and open that door
because this is all you'll ever have
get up, the world's leaving you behind
better run fast, and follow a line
because this is all you'll ever have
Thanks... you liked the way how I opened the chorus? I am improving!! lol. What you think of the vocal production mix? because when I was listening to it... I thought I was too loud at some point. Like I listened to other songs, and even though the vocals goes from a sweet to a more heavy voice, the volume is about the same. Yea, I need to work on figuring that out.
I like how your vocals are fitting in with this.
You sure are approving, and like I said in the no-vox post, I really like the chorus!!
Your vocals are clipping a lot or something, maybe needs a little work production wise...but great execution.
rock on
You sure are approving, and like I said in the no-vox post, I really like the chorus!!
Your vocals are clipping a lot or something, maybe needs a little work production wise...but great execution.
rock on
Hmmm... This has potential... but... Distorting on the vox... lack of confidence as well... Also IMHO you have to bring a new spin on the emo thing... its way played out. Cut some of the low end of the kicks as they are stealing some thunder. Having said all that, the talent here is obvious... keep honing your skills!
Other then then the distortion as others have mentioned, I as well, believe the song has good potential. I think the problem lies in the recording input. If you are using your PC I always recommend going in from a low impedance (i.e. headphones out jack from an amp for example). Be very carefull of going directly into your pc using line in or mic in with a pure high impedance output from any source. Sure way of frying one's soundcard. if not the whole motherboard. *just a suggestion. I think that may solve your issue with the distortion.
Grt attempt , otherwise!
Grt attempt , otherwise!
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