Tocsin ( Instrumental ) - Demo
Written & Composed by
M.Mahfouz-MyzzyM


*Live Version:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dfF1A3f1IE4

...from demo album " Life : The touchable dream..." ,

www.myspace.com/foxidoband

Great Drama.

Interesting arrangement.

Nice lead guitar.

Nice live feel.

A lot of work has gone into this, Well done!!!

Denis

AS I HEAR..OK Start......... SAMPLe....Guitar solo OK and V Nice..THen synth repeat.more guitar............. ok............orch and guitar
I am not enjoying this...............
3:20
3:44
sympathy............none
4:00 more stupid guitar
5:00 stop and ask why????

Dunno but it sounds like a guitar with a backin track...........or something similar..........

So to me it sounds not right...........(original)

Its the background .......... it sounds pre recorded.............

or maybe just your mix..........

Fish

Sorry to sound so negative ----- its just the way I hear it
the music is good it just sounds strange to me

It doesnt sound like u had anything to do with production.........

Doesnt sound like a BAND

FISH

(HOW CAN I BE SO FAR AWAY FROM DENIS CRITIQUE..........SORRY.....)

Thanks for your words guys , whether positive or negative ,

These are just tracks from my demo , which i recorded few years ago in my poor home computer studio , when i had 0 experience about recording softwares , and mixing tutorials , but by the time I'm learning , as much as i am just a composer and artist not a sound engineer, and even though isn't that recording professional place , just windows XP and Pentium 4 PC which i bought mainly for browsing the net , and can't carry the costs of a professional music recording one nor software...

Cheers
Thanks alot for your truthful words...soon i'll upload more from the mess " Life : The touchable dream..."

Luv you
MyzzyM

Nice arrangements...

nice guitar work,  cool tones,  the guitar gets clustered up in a couple of spots like you
 are tying to do to much,, loses the flow of it, you fast passages need some more work. That said it is probably better than what I would do.

Toasted goat ...you're right i know what Ur talking about , the breaking parts ,

actually the reason for it wasn't how much work  had to practice , but the reason was the cheap guitar i used to record this song , it wasn't my S Serious Ibanez guitar which i recorded the rest of the demo by it ...

but great musician ear you have so much greetings and thanks alot guys for your building comments , pushing me to better artist.

MyzzyM

itd be great if you truthfully reviewed our songs

This is very intricate in guitar playing. Wow. You are not somehow related to Jimmy Hendrix? Fine stuff. Great for a movie. I love the flow on the chording in this the choice of chord progressions. Very professional!!! It has that Egyptian feel to it at different selected parts. Cool!!!Take care...jgv

been far for a very long time, just met your comments now so,

thanks alot for your words...

i just uploaded two more songs from the demo,
the verdict
lies

hope to hear from you

thanks
myzym

sorry for the very late reply,
i was away for a very long time,

of course it will be my pleasure to review your songs, and tell you my honest opinion.


cheers
myzym

I don't mind this, the guitar is talented and the synth is good, i especially like the gothic like synth sound that appears now and again, kind of nostalgic sounding like an old computer game,  pretty cool,  it does need tightened up a bit though, it seems like it's all there but some editing of the track could keep it fresh through the full track. Good stuff though

Would Love for you to do some Guitar on Some Of My music!

it will be a pleasure...


cheers
myzym