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#1February 7th, 2009 · 09:26 PM
9 threads / 9 songs
27 posts
Egypt
The Conception Within
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It’s in the battle 2009-02


The Conception within " Demo " - FoxIdo
Written and composed by
 M.Mahfouz "Myzzym"


As I keep reminding you by the merits of the past and the last inquiry in mind.

Feel frustrated and consistently naked.
Ache the pain one more deny.
Rush the fear out unto the light.

As I keep surrounding you by the shadows of the last, the ruin , the blame of I barely find my kind.
The truth enriched the rain of sarcastic scenes lessened which I / You ,cant deny


The peace in mind was just the flammable deed, I thought I could find to blind.
Touch me, Touch me let me feel at least one of my kind.


The flame and we'll keep it alive.
The grace we distinct with time.
The lace of hope and divide.
The face of rejection, the real comprehension, the mystic conception
The dark
It keeps us

Alive recalling the pride.
In hate we share and rewind.
I am here the near pacifying.
The face of rejection, the real comprehension
We participate in
Lies

The race inside was just the liberty I gave to my pride.
The weak inside was just the feminine creep I keep to die………to die.


The top of despair is silence




FoxIdo
The Conception within.
Written and composed by :
M.Mahfouz Myzsem



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#2February 7th, 2009 · 10:25 PM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
Oh yes
Beautiful production , equality mix and mastering ,
awesome music , professional vocals and playing...

Cheers
M....
Just thought Id copy and paste the same thing you posted to all 3 different reviews you did...
To bad ..I could actually given you some better comments..O well Karma I guess
#3February 7th, 2009 · 11:05 PM
9 threads / 9 songs
27 posts
Egypt
im new here
#4February 7th, 2009 · 11:26 PM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
Cool ...Welcome aboard, just a suggestion..If your are going to comment at least take the time to write something ..Copy and paste is kinda lame don't you think...
But maybe you can go back and do a little better on those 3 reviews and maybe I can give yours an honest one too if you care for one...
Anyways..
#5February 7th, 2009 · 11:29 PM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
Oh see you did another three with a different line..
Nice arrengement..
Wow

You won't last long here I'm sure...
#6February 8th, 2009 · 12:56 PM
65 threads / 2 songs
1,062 posts
United States of America
Beautiful production , equality mix and mastering ,
awesome music , professional vocals and playing...
#7February 8th, 2009 · 04:53 PM
189 threads / 27 songs
2,834 posts
Germany
lots of compression

the guitar player shows good skills

the flute gives it a nice oriental touch
#8February 9th, 2009 · 04:11 PM
176 threads / 26 songs
2,342 posts
United Kingdom
re: The Conception Within
Hmmm this is not my cup of tea.......
Very well done and Ive checked out your Myspace....
Someone might love it.............I'm sure..........



fish
#9February 9th, 2009 · 05:17 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,394 posts
United Kingdom
Sorry it's OVER produced for me.

Lead guitar as TK said makes it.

Denis
#10February 9th, 2009 · 08:22 PM
24 threads / 15 songs
160 posts
United States of America
Yeah.... I think he's welcome here Fish. Bandamp is made by musicians and for musicians. And I think that he's a musician alright.
#11February 10th, 2009 · 07:16 AM
176 threads / 26 songs
2,342 posts
United Kingdom
re: The Conception Within
very Eftos Like........

I listened to this again.........

It can grow on you!!!!!

bewildered Fish
#12February 10th, 2009 · 11:52 AM
5 threads / 5 songs
590 posts
United Kingdom
Yes, all musicians are welcome here, but if you look at MizzyM's past posts you'll see what Marino is talking about (all of his feedback is the same generic statement). You can't expect people to give you meaningful feedback about your own music if you don't even bother to do the same for others. That doesn't contribute anything to the Bandamp community, and therefore I'm not even going to take the time to listen to this.
#13February 10th, 2009 · 04:32 PM
341 threads / 59 songs
4,361 posts
Cymru (Wales)
Very different to the last one I listened to.
The sound is just too muddy , though there seams to be an awesome track under all that 'over production'.
I can also hear the Eftos thing , strongly !
#14February 10th, 2009 · 07:43 PM
89 posts
Canada
Hey, love the flute, starting with that.  Nice shift to the ambiance of the piece.  I also agree with the above comments, it seemed way too muddy for me to really get what was going on, though I have no idea what to do about it lol.

I am also not terribly into this vocal style:  just my deal lol though I KNOW someone will love it, actually 3 of my friends already do lol (they are into that kinda thing though).

Beyond that, the guitar is sweet!  Heavy metal not being my thing, I can still appreciate a crazy lead guitar... kudos, that's freakin awesome, especially near the end (3:18 onward).  Clean up the mud, and I think you have quite the song.  No hard feelings lol, my production value sucks more ass than that : )  Keep it going man, and welcome to bandamp.
#15February 19th, 2009 · 01:45 PM
9 threads / 9 songs
27 posts
Egypt
Cheers
Cheers
For your strong and truthful words musician friends...

Yourz
Myzy
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