Don't mind the title and don't mind the lyrics, I think they'r fun tho. Just enjoy if u like it and excuse the crappy sound.

Beautiful production , equality mix and mastering ,
awesome music , professional vocals and playing...

Cheers
MyzzyM

Wohoo...Nice arpeggio and chord progression..Love the melody.....!!!!!
Very much like a lullaby....Dude great playing!!!!

Suena un poco a silvio rodriguez..
Nueva trova for ever!!(lol)!!!!

Awful production but the guitar plays sweet. Drop down the deep E to D and you can play the whole D chord at the end.

ehm
You should look for someone who wants to sing this song, sorry

OK u say its a crappy sound ...............
so how to make it better??
sounds like u recording voc and guitar together in 1 take/pass
so maybe use a program like audacity (free) that lets u multi track........voc and guitar separate

Try here:
http://audacity.sourceforge.net/

its a start..................and its free

swordfish

Nice guitar work. Vocals need improvement.

Aside form the poor quality great production.
I guess you could say you need some work on your vocals, but I like them...they remind me of Dire Straits...very great!

Great guitar work.

Good rating

I think that this deserves to be redone..It does have potential...

Flyer

nice rating

This sounds to me like there's a lot of ability and style that's not being translated in the recording.  You are much better than what we are hearing in this mix!