Listening back to it (on headphones) it doesn't sound too bad. Was recorded at like 3am-5am one night so it's not really the best mix, but I thought I'd sahre it with everyone because it'll probably be the only recording of this little song made .

I like the chords used, they give out a lot of color.  you should work with this one a little more.

I like this also A...It grows on you as it goes on..I agree that you should work on it ..but it can fly as is as far as I'm concerned.....

Flyer

Really nice progressions and everything here. This is even good the way it is, although you could make it like a 13 minute song with awesome lyrics and drawn out guitar solos

But no really this is really good I really like it everything fits really well.
Great job

Love the feel and overall sound.

Definately needs vocals.

You must keep working on it, even if it's 3am in the morning, it will be well worth it

Cheers

Denis

Thanks for the feedback, I think I might do some more stuff to upload sometime.
See you guys around ^^

Like the progression and chordal dynamics with this piece aarOj
Tastefully played , kinda emotive and gritty
Makings of a truly cool song here
good luck and listen 4 new 2
cheers
greg
blakhatz

Thought i might stop by and comment on your song since you've been at my place !

i like this man. i don't think it's a bad sound at all, sounds professional to me. ( or am i just a beginner when it comes to recording.. ? )  i was kinda thinkin.. do you want to add vocals to this or just leave it instrumental ? 'cause i'm sitting here getting some ideas of how you could do that part. Do you sing ?

Great song. i like it. and with a little extra work , this could really turn into something cool.

c ya

// adam

Hey welcome back amigo,nice to see you around again.. This quite a good and tasteful piece.. Many great ideas.. Sounds very like what's out there today.. The solo was a bit low but nice one....Anyways yes this track could end up been a real good song...

pretty dick all around. nothing bad about it.sounds amazing.

I like this tune a lot
It has great potential to become a killer song
Guitars are well produced
To me the drums are not ripely enough to support the guitars. IMO I would pump up the snare, toms are ok but could be louder a bit, less cymbals and less open hihats and some more low frequencies to the whole drum kit
I have a vocal line (not lyrics) in mind with a 2 or 3 layered voices in the chorus. A bit fresh up in the left and the right corner with some surrounding sounds in the background and ta-taaaa ready!

forget about what I've written, sometimes my mind turns to be ancient... ha ha hai
Good job!