This is the first ever song I recorded. Thats why it sounds so bad. I hadn't figured out how to use my audio software properly. My voice sounds terrible on this. I did it in one take and didn't change it. I may re-record this song again if I can find the original file. Anywhoo, tell me what you think.

i like the upbeat feel of this one, and i don't think the vocals are all the bad.  yeah, work can always be done with stuff, and i can tell what you mean by not knowing how to use the software very well, but it's not really that bad.  i like it how the guitar part that it opens with isn't just paced strumming.  yay for originality

It's heard you have your own way to express. Keep on making music.

very cool doll!, lots of life to it. Give us more

Your great at French 

Bacci bella

Rod

I'm not able to play this one decently. Maybe it's a problem in my speakers but the music comes and goes.

beautiful and poetic, ur gonna make it big

i like your voice

it's nice to hear people's singular live takes, cuz it gives you a good idea of what they're ACTUALLY capable of. modern technology and multitrack recording equipment often masks the true essence of the real artisic expression... i love to hear the raw sound...

the song and the music really shines through... this is a prime example of crappy production and great music...

i like when you stop and sigh and then say "you bore me" lol ... very sexy ...

keep rockin

you've got quite a voice, it's different - it's interesting.  do you do the music too?  or just the guitar?  or is that your band?  either way, sounds good! 

I did everything in the song.
I'd love to be in a band though, I can only do really simple stuff. It would be nice to sing with people who actually know what they're doing...I havn't got a bloodi clue. lol 

This is nice song, indeed you've got an interesting voice, and a catchy style aswell. Interesting...

The other song that I heard from you was that, unlike the others it didn't catch me. But this one sounds better. That's all. Bye.

gah you amaze me. that simple.

you really know how to write good songs. they have everything a great song should have.
you should get some $$$$ together and get a real good pro demo done up at a studio.
Maybe play some gigs save your $$$ from the gigs for studio work.  I could see you gettin
on the radio.

like the raw sound of this...you have a unique voice...your lyrics are thought-provoking. 

It's great of you to post this, your first song recording...it really shows how much you've learned, because the recording of your newer stuff is markedly improved.  Cudos to you!

I hear some Cyndi Lauperishness!  Rock on, girl!  Love the feel at 1:49 -- hear the possibility of bass boom here between the spaces, rather than electronic -- to make it even more powerful.  But, I confess, my ears are not synth-friendly, that's just me.  M.F. -- I couldn't bring myself to do more than **** for my "Go **** Your Magazine," -- you're layin' it out there!  You definitely don't need to apologize, perfect is boring -- cool song!