#1January 14th, 2009 · 01:28 PM
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United States of America
Dirge for a Pirate
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#2January 15th, 2009 · 04:16 AM
24 threads / 15 songs
160 posts
United States of America
I suggest putting some electric percussion for this I think that would improve it. Maybe a solid quarter beat kick (dance-type) drum throughout the whole song would do. Unless you thought of this as just a song with no drums. I don't know but I thought it kinda lacks progression, it sounds the same to me (well I know it's completly repetitive) but it often would make the listener to stop listening to the song.
#3January 15th, 2009 · 11:10 PM
51 threads / 31 songs
114 posts
United States of America
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#4January 15th, 2009 · 11:56 PM
181 threads / 54 songs
1,930 posts
Canada
point well made
#5January 15th, 2009 · 11:56 PM
157 threads / 30 songs
1,952 posts
United States of America
pirate dirge
I like the retro organ sound and playing.. I wished the eq'n was just a bit brighter on the vocals.. they are not clear in the mix... are you burping in the song.. what is that.. hahahah.  I can't make out the lyrics to well.  Nice storm sounds in the song.
#6January 16th, 2009 · 01:53 AM
116 threads / 53 songs
3,063 posts
Netherlands
This has a particular vibe to it. Strongly reminds me of Edward Ka-Spel's earlier solo work, maybe cross hatched with Velvet Underground. Again the "poetic" nature (also in the "visual poetry"-like Sunshine Girl lyric you posted) really fuels imagination, but also makes me think that you might be on drugs or something (or prescription medication atleast)

Well done though.
#7January 16th, 2009 · 06:10 PM
5 threads / 5 songs
590 posts
United Kingdom
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