I spent most of the night .. well.. from 11 PM until 1.45 AM recording and mixing vocals lol.

Tell me what you think!





LYRICS



Verse 1

How am I supposed to hear you dear
When all I wanted to be clear
Was lost inside your hopeless mind
I'm waiting for a fall from this and

How can I resist the urge to fight
Resist the urge of all my life
I'm waiting for that girl to bring me down
I'm waiting for a fall from this and



Pre-Chorus

You say you always get what you're after


Chorus

And you say that it's hard to break but
My heart breaks when you walk away and
The lies you spread
I wanna break them
I'm coming home today


Verse 2

How can I resist to kiss you and miss you
When I'm feeling how I feel
You said that we're just friends
But do friends do this?

You'd hug me and kiss me and tell me you need me
When I'm right there
Just like you always did just like you always would
Again



Pre-Chorus

You say you always get what you're after


Chorus x2

And you say that it's hard to break but
My heart breaks when you walk away and
The lies you spread
I wanna break them
I'm coming home today


Bridge

Cus there's beats and there's rhymes
That might have changed your mind
So I'm here again
Asking you the truth
Tell me more
Words you said about me that night
Tell me more
Ways you lied about the times you cried
Tell me more
And the way you're gonna leave me now

Pre-Chorus

You say you always get what you're after


Chorus

And you say that it's hard to break but
My heart breaks when you walk away and
The lies you spread
I wanna break them
I'm coming home today


Bridge
1, 2, break this up a bit
3, 4, come to see more
5, 6, I wanna see you miss
1, 2, say you love me
3, 4, come to see me more
5, 6, say you slept with him


Bridge 2 (based on chorus)

And you say that it's hard to break but
My heart breaks when you walk away and
The lies you spread
I wanna break them
I'm coming home today


Chorus

And you say that it's hard to break but
My heart breaks when you walk away and
The lies you spread
I wanna break them
I'm coming home today


Outro

How am I supposed to hear you dear
When all I wanted to be clear
Was lost inside your hopeless mind
I'm waiting for a fall from this and

Bravo man bravo.
Youve come a far way and this is amazing. the mixing/quality could use a little work but im just giving you a hard time.
excellent build up, and excellent lyrics. great job with this one.
rock on

Catchy. I like it. The whole thing comes together well and the vocals sound really good, the interplay between the voices is well done, the whole thing sounds very professional. All in all a great song. Keep it up.

Wow thanks for kind comments guys... really means a lot to know how much I've improved! 

haha this is how I used to feel with my friend before we started dating. Nice song. Yea, dude I def like your style. Nice mix, I really like the subtle use of that vocoder (vocoder right?) Although as I was listening, it felt like it was missing something.... Maybe an a solide acoustic rhythm guitar, or a sharp mellow distorted guitar. Idk... something that would liven up the song a bit. But I really like this song just because I can relate to this. Good Job!

Wow, great song, sounds very cool...

It was an auto tune, but it does the same thing haha. Yeah I liked the lyrics and message in this song .

Thanks for the reviews guys!