Re-recorded vocals (because last time I recorded when I was ill!) and tweaked instruments.



LYRICS

You've got your head held up so high
That you can't look back down to see
The world that you've left behind you
It's falling out of sight
Your range of thought seems to lie within
This broken democracy
Something there in the back of your mind
Kept you hanging on

Chorus

And I always think that
Lying on this side
Lying on this side
Is hard to beat
And I always think that
Lying on this side
Lying on this side
Is hard for me to beat

These rules and consequences
Will pass you through these lonely days alone
You'll see me walking down that road
But I can't stop to listen
Why don't you think about the ways
That you might have lost me my dear
There in the back of my mind
Something kept me moving on

Chorus

And I always think that
Lying on this side
Lying on this side
Is hard to beat
And I always think that
Lying on this side
Lying on this side
Is hard for me to beat

Bridge

Tonight she lost her chance to say
She lost her chance to make it right
I don't know why she cannot leave
I don't know what she wants to be

Chorus

And I always think that
Lying on this side
Lying on this side
Is hard to beat
And I always think that
Lying on this side
Lying on this side
Is hard for me to beat

Hey.. you're using an auto-tuner.. !! Cheeeeaaaattttt!!! LMAO

Hmmmm the tune isn't bad at all. Nice piano work and cello in there. The drums do work but theyre slightly too dry and too much for the classical instruments.... The auto-tuned vox are ofcourse a nice experiment but not something that pleases my ears... Mostly because theres audible aliasing - it sounds too digital.. I prefer a more human voice... And I know you have a good voice - don't be afraid to use it pure! So what if you won't be 100% dead-on tune!

Good job on the tune overall though, don't get me wrong!

lovely song, but I don't like this pitched voice