pleases give some feedback on mastering software..this is diff from 1st porject

freaking ..splicing ..cutting...arrrrgggggg...cubase le..abelton..????

I'm getting a cool 'Big Log' feel...hey it just got quicker.....oo guitar is even further than in the first bit.
You could get both the guitar and the drum much 'clearer'...... YES like that !!! lol
Now that guitar is clear, where's the rest of the tracks?
What do you want to splice and cut? this just needs a bass, some vocals and a few simple effects.

It is kinda "Big Log" meets "Ten Years Gone" init.  Yes, Kings... Bass! and some deep ass lyrics.  Ooohh, not sure ab out the heavy part but then i was on about the "Big Log" thing...  Fill it out, mate for a winner!

EZ Drummer Rock/Pop Kit. That snare sounds so unique (tell me if I'm wrong, please).
You must take the distortion guitar more to the front. Also and some bass.
But the idea sounds pretty interesting.

          > Iszil

The intro is twice as long as I expected. I would continue the intro with some verse vocals after 0:30 and use only the distortion part as a backing track for a heavy solo guitar. You played a chord variation around the clean A. Put some dirty E major, G flat minor and D major  in it and it works for me.
I like the idea with that deep ass lyrics.