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#1December 25th, 2008 · 03:20 PM
49 threads / 43 songs
130 posts
Netherlands
Wisdom - Child
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This song is not in a battle


Bandamp people!

I noticed it has been 13 months ago already since I wrote a song...

And now there is big news...yes...I will become father in 6 months

So..to celebrate that...i've been trying to start working out a new song..here the result...

If anyone wants to help me with it (especially lyrics)...you help is appreciated

Song excist out of 2 'different' parts.. have fun

Greetings!

UPDATE: because the mp3 has to be at least 1 mb in size...i added the original reason file first...which means.....from 0:00 original reason demo...from 0:42 Change.....from 1:04 reason file with guitar

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#2December 25th, 2008 · 04:07 PM
181 threads / 54 songs
1,930 posts
Canada
I am loving this! I don't have much time to leave any critiscm right now, (I will later), but I really like how you have updated this with the guitar. Nice work
#3December 26th, 2008 · 04:05 PM
49 threads / 43 songs
130 posts
Netherlands
Tnx the kanudiun
#4December 26th, 2008 · 04:28 PM
181 threads / 54 songs
1,930 posts
Canada
Yes this song has great structure, and great guitar. Nice work! I rated.
#5December 26th, 2008 · 05:59 PM
163 threads / 18 songs
2,320 posts
United Kingdom
re: Wisdom - Child
Nice work in October!!!!!!!!!
Congrats.......and good luck!!!!!

Would love to help with song ( bit of ska trombone + )but cant download it!!

fish
#6December 26th, 2008 · 06:08 PM
49 threads / 43 songs
130 posts
Netherlands
re: re: Wisdom - Child
Contact me on Skype for the mp3 :):)
Thanx man

swordfish wrote…
Nice work in October!!!!!!!!!
Congrats.......and good luck!!!!!

Would love to help with song ( bit of ska trombone + )but cant download it!!

fish
#7December 26th, 2008 · 06:15 PM
163 threads / 18 songs
2,320 posts
United Kingdom
re: re: re: Wisdom - Child
ur offline skype as we speak

 
#8December 27th, 2008 · 02:52 AM
49 threads / 43 songs
130 posts
Netherlands
re: re: re: re: Wisdom - Child
Download options is turned on now Since I missed you on Skype yesterday

swordfish wrote…
ur offline skype as we speak

 :D
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#9December 27th, 2008 · 03:45 AM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
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Hey Wiz..Congrats on the Baby..this is sounding really nice..well mixed ..
Nice rating

Flyer
#10December 27th, 2008 · 02:53 PM
49 threads / 43 songs
130 posts
Netherlands
re: .
Thanks for the comment flyer!
Means a lot to me that you take some time to listen my demos

FLYER7747 wrote…
Hey Wiz..Congrats on the Baby..this is sounding really nice..well mixed ..
Nice rating

Flyer

Maybe there is someone who might help me out with lyrics and song structure here?
#11December 27th, 2008 · 04:17 PM
24 threads
166 posts
United States of America
hey man... i like the song and how it flows from a ska/raggea to rock and then back again!!!
thats pretty neat... i would add some bass to it though! but hey thats just me
get some funky riffage going and just like free form jam on it!!
#12December 28th, 2008 · 05:21 AM
118 threads / 55 songs
3,079 posts
Netherlands
Sweet little track, very nice vibe going there. It just aches to be completed with vocals and stuff..  Oh well!

Gratz@becoming father! That's going to a major change in your life... Hehehe.. . But who knows the initial sleep deprivation (once the baby is there) will lead to even more inspiration. Or maybe you can combine all-night recording sessions with nightly baby duties altogether Sounds like a win-win-win situation coz your girl can stay sound asleep in that case :P

Good luck!
#13December 29th, 2008 · 01:44 AM
49 threads / 43 songs
130 posts
Netherlands
Hahaha!
LoL PX :P

PuppetXeno wrote…
Sweet little track, very nice vibe going there. It just aches to be completed with vocals and stuff..  Oh well!

Gratz@becoming father! That's going to a major change in your life... Hehehe.. . But who knows the initial sleep deprivation (once the baby is there) will lead to even more inspiration. Or maybe you can combine all-night recording sessions with nightly baby duties altogether Sounds like a win-win-win situation coz your girl can stay sound asleep in that case :P

Good luck!
#14December 31st, 2008 · 07:10 AM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
re: re: .
Hey Wiz...I'm working on a few projects...give me a little bit of time...see if anyone does anything with this first....

Wisdom wrote…
Thanks for the comment flyer!
Means a lot to me that you take some time to listen my demos

FLYER7747 wrote…
Hey Wiz..Congrats on the Baby..this is sounding really nice..well mixed ..
Nice rating

Flyer

Maybe there is someone who might help me out with lyrics and song structure here? :D
#15January 16th, 2009 · 04:57 AM
49 threads / 43 songs
130 posts
Netherlands
Lyrics anyone? :P
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