| Wisdom - Child |   |
Bandamp people!
I noticed it has been 13 months ago already since I wrote a song...
And now there is big news...yes...I will become father in 6 months
So..to celebrate that...i've been trying to start working out a new song..here the result...
If anyone wants to help me with it (especially lyrics)...you help is appreciated
Song excist out of 2 'different' parts.. have fun
Greetings!
UPDATE: because the mp3 has to be at least 1 mb in size...i added the original reason file first...which means.....from 0:00 original reason demo...from 0:42 Change.....from 1:04 reason file with guitar
I noticed it has been 13 months ago already since I wrote a song...
And now there is big news...yes...I will become father in 6 months
So..to celebrate that...i've been trying to start working out a new song..here the result...
If anyone wants to help me with it (especially lyrics)...you help is appreciated
Song excist out of 2 'different' parts.. have fun
Greetings!
UPDATE: because the mp3 has to be at least 1 mb in size...i added the original reason file first...which means.....from 0:00 original reason demo...from 0:42 Change.....from 1:04 reason file with guitar
I am loving this! I don't have much time to leave any critiscm right now, (I will later), but I really like how you have updated this with the guitar. Nice work
Yes this song has great structure, and great guitar. Nice work! I rated.
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Contact me on Skype for the mp3 :):)
Thanx man
Thanx man
swordfish wrote…
Nice work in October!!!!!!!!!
Congrats.......and good luck!!!!!
Would love to help with song ( bit of ska trombone + )but cant download it!!
fish
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Download options is turned on now 
Since I missed you on Skype yesterday
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Since I missed you on Skype yesterday swordfish wrote…
ur offline skype as we speak
:D
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Thanks for the comment flyer!
Means a lot to me that you take some time to listen my demos
Maybe there is someone who might help me out with lyrics and song structure here?
Means a lot to me that you take some time to listen my demos
FLYER7747 wrote…
Hey Wiz..Congrats on the Baby..this is sounding really nice..well mixed ..
Nice rating
Flyer
Maybe there is someone who might help me out with lyrics and song structure here?
hey man... i like the song and how it flows from a ska/raggea to rock and then back again!!!
thats pretty neat... i would add some bass to it though! but hey thats just me
get some funky riffage going and just like free form jam on it!!
thats pretty neat... i would add some bass to it though! but hey thats just me
get some funky riffage going and just like free form jam on it!!
Sweet little track, very nice vibe going there. It just aches to be completed with vocals and stuff.. Oh well!
Gratz@becoming father! That's going to a major change in your life... Hehehe.. . But who knows the initial sleep deprivation (once the baby is there) will lead to even more inspiration. Or maybe you can combine all-night recording sessions with nightly baby duties altogether
Sounds like a win-win-win situation coz your girl can stay sound asleep in that case :P
Good luck!
Gratz@becoming father! That's going to a major change in your life... Hehehe.. . But who knows the initial sleep deprivation (once the baby is there) will lead to even more inspiration. Or maybe you can combine all-night recording sessions with nightly baby duties altogether
Sounds like a win-win-win situation coz your girl can stay sound asleep in that case :PGood luck!
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LoL PX :P
PuppetXeno wrote…
Sweet little track, very nice vibe going there. It just aches to be completed with vocals and stuff.. Oh well!
Gratz@becoming father! That's going to a major change in your life... Hehehe.. . But who knows the initial sleep deprivation (once the baby is there) will lead to even more inspiration. Or maybe you can combine all-night recording sessions with nightly baby duties altogether
Good luck!
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Hey Wiz...I'm working on a few projects...give me a little bit of time...see if anyone does anything with this first....
Wisdom wrote…
Thanks for the comment flyer!
Means a lot to me that you take some time to listen my demosFLYER7747 wrote…
Hey Wiz..Congrats on the Baby..this is sounding really nice..well mixed ..
Nice rating
Flyer
Maybe there is someone who might help me out with lyrics and song structure here? :D
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