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It missed the last letter out

Pretty good. I was expecting some more instrumentation to kick in and for it to turn into a pop-punk type song, but to be quite honest, I'm glad it didn't.

Nice work here! I agree with clusterone where I was expecting more instruments to come in, but I guess it fits with out them.
Nice vocals!

I feel some ppppppppppain in my ears when I heard that p p p p p plopping around
dummdaa diddy dumm

nice vocals and lyrics

Me too expected a full arrangement... It seems I can hear it in my mind somewhere

Indeed, this does give the idea that there's going to be a full arrangement. It could easily have one. It's a decent track that could be turned into a contempary punk-rock tune. Lyrics and vocals are fine for that, well done.