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this needs something else.
anyone want to take it and do something with it?

I don't know ..... I like it like it is... this is very very good.  nice panning and placement. tones are excellent.  It's very good gets very good vote.  I love the deep bass and the percussion is well placed.  this is interesting to listen too.

Sounds pretty good to me, how about adding a 90's style vocal to it.

Keep working on it!!

Denis

Erasure like in its construction and sounds.  I agree that vocals would raise this somewhat - but then it's a pretty interesting bit of music without.
Amy, where is your voice!!!

And btw, it's good to see you on the amp again.
Hope all's going well for you
Jim A

This is really cool tunage. Well ofcourse it needs vocals, I'm thinking something mantra-chant like, not a narrative lyric but something with a lot of repetition. And vocal effects (delay). Definately a nice track so far, very interesting how your style evolves over time.

good job

The whole sounds is really cool.
May be some vocal line, as they all say could good. Repetitive one, as PX said, is a good a idea.
But I loved the sound, the panning, the VST used.

           > Iszil

Really nice work. Not really what I would listen to, but good job!

If you are going to put in vocals,
I would hope for some twisted modulation...
Like a vocoder
But overall a great jam

Love the beat with the synth tones.
Reminds me a little of Daft P.

cool stuff