This is a song about war, but not a subject that has been written about before.  Be sure to listen to the solo coming almost immediately after the 3 minute break.

The intro caught me.  Your lead guitar doesnt mesh with the rest though, and maybe thats how you wanted it...but it sounds really cool.
The metal-ish part is awesome. Love the growling. Its great.

one word...timing

i liked the whole thing especially the intro but the lead vocals are just a tad bit over powering...but otherwise its great

its all real good except for your metal tone, it's too........much.....if u re-recorded it with a smoother less mish-mash tone it would be really good.

Metallllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllica! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
That's what I'm talking about! Now for all you young'ns I'm not talking Enter Sandman and those load and reload bullshit albums.....Kill em all, Ride the Lightning, And Justice for All.......Master of Puppets... The amp needs more of this stuff...............

the mix needs to be improved. vocals are vocals are a little loud.......does not blend in with the instruments.
the sound of metal makes me jump.like the change at 3:06.


seriously..........its oxygen.........more heavy tracks on the amp...........that's what we need.