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#1November 28th, 2008 · 08:31 PM
29 threads / 14 songs
355 posts
Poland
Living FREE (JBP & JIMinUK)
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Please vote for this song !
Current votes: 11 (needs min. 15)
It’s in the battle 2008-12


Jim doesn't know about it yet but I have used his lyrics from the Lyric forum....
I hope he doesn't mind. I composed the song as I went along recording it.
Let me know what you think, please. Just finished so it's as fresh as it gets.
I have left the third verse for Jim to sing to - if you want to, Jim!


The lyrics: http://forum.bandamp.com/Lyrics_Review/14960.html

Living Free

My life has become me,
My world all around me.
Thinking of the way I live
And what I do
And who I see
And why

I live in safe seclusion
Come on in to my illusion
Be blinded by my show
The more you see
The less you know
The more you see
The less you know
Of me

So now it's all inside me
Gagged and tied, but living free
Not giving clues to any one
In what I do
And what I say
No way

Fooled by my delusion
The simple and plain conclusion
I lost something when I let you go
Time to break free
Of this memory
Breaking free
Of the memory
Of you


PS.
Oh, dear! I've just noticed that Jim is already doing this song with Denis...
Dang...

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#2November 29th, 2008 · 12:05 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,365 posts
United Kingdom
I love the chorus, quite catchy.

It will be interesting the two styles of music with same lyrics. I'm meeting up with Jim on the 9th
Dec to record the vocals.

As always JBP you never fail to impress me with your songwriting skills, you are a true pro. I enjoyed listening.


Well done!!

Denis
#3November 29th, 2008 · 03:18 PM
54 threads / 29 songs
1,552 posts
United Kingdom
Good grief JBP you really do come up with some great music don't you!

I feel quite honoured that you liked the lyrics enough to write music to them... not sure I'll sing the 3rd verse yet - it will just confuse the hell out of me when I meet up with Denis in a week or so!!

I do like the chorus too - and the whole song is just so different to the way I envisage (and sing it to Denis' music).

Good job JBP, good job
#4November 29th, 2008 · 04:22 PM
160 threads / 88 songs
1,666 posts
United States of America
wow
really nice...  great feel to it... will be nice to see how the other contrasts and compliments this one.. Seeing that the other is a much slower piece.. Should be really interesting...  Different moods for the same lyrics..

           JimK
#5November 29th, 2008 · 06:22 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
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Amazing..This is not what I had in mind as far as music when I was reading Jiminuk's lyrics ..IA Pink Floyd style of music was in my mind for the lyrics..This is amazing JBP...The only thing I can add to what I have said is.....Well, I already said it ..Amazing. Nice work JBP..I'm going to save this one..

Flyer

Nice Rating
#6November 29th, 2008 · 07:02 PM
117 threads / 55 songs
1,538 posts
Chile
Beautiful.
That chorus sounds pretty catchy, and those "Oola Lala" reminded me of some Beatles stuff.
There's something in the mix that bothers me, but I can't tell what... may be some ambiance noise?
Anyway, great job with this lyrics.

          > Iszil
#7November 29th, 2008 · 10:56 PM
157 threads / 30 songs
1,952 posts
United States of America
excellent, great lyrics, great music. This is great song writing.  love the effective bass line. nice guitar playing. the last guitar run before the vocals come back in is very tasty.  excellent song.
#8November 29th, 2008 · 11:13 PM
27 threads / 2 songs
179 posts
Canada
Fantastic!
Very, very well put together.

Lyrics seemed short to me upon reading but I tend to go on and on with lyrics lol. Once they were added to music though, it turned out great!

Good simple lyrics with a mellow tune to back it up makes a good combination.

Seems some parts you could have pushed the vocals a bit more to get more out of the edge you have in your voice sometimes.

Great song guys!

-Mark
#9November 30th, 2008 · 06:03 AM
29 threads / 14 songs
355 posts
Poland
Hey, Thank you all! I never expected such positive feedback
I thought I might add that all instruments ex the guitar have been sampled using FL.
I am very glad you enjoyed it!!
#10December 10th, 2008 · 05:38 PM
155 threads / 12 songs
2,297 posts
United Kingdom
re: Living FREE (JBP & JIMinUK)
Just the best as ever !!!!!!!!!!!!!

100%

fish
#11December 10th, 2008 · 05:39 PM
155 threads / 12 songs
2,297 posts
United Kingdom
re: re: Living FREE (JBP & JIMinUK)
Now this is the JBP sound I like!!!!
Its got life!!!! EMOTION!!
spontanaity!!!
viva JIM!!
#12December 11th, 2008 · 06:12 AM
187 threads / 27 songs
2,792 posts
Germany
good music
I would like to hear the "No way no way no way" with 2 or 3 vox layers
#13December 14th, 2008 · 09:27 PM
22 threads / 22 songs
64 posts
United States of America
gotta admit...
sounds pretty sick. sounds like a hit to me.
#14December 15th, 2008 · 09:28 PM
30 threads / 5 songs
757 posts
Australia
Always a treat to hear your work mate .
Sorry took so long to get to it.
Great vocals , tres emotive, deadly lyrics and interprtation .
Instrumentation sensitive tasteful arrangement show the depth of your passion .
thanks for the listen
greg
blakhatz
#15January 21st, 2010 · 05:53 PM
15 threads / 15 songs
48 posts
Sweden
Cosy...
I just happened to come cross your page JBP.
I love this song, very well put together and man, your vox is killin'

bu to my disappointment, I saw that this is your latest song Uploaded, am I right?
what happened I want more of this..

anyway, Great job man.

// adam
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