#1November 24th, 2008 · 11:15 AM
22 threads / 22 songs
64 posts
United States of America
Exploration
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#2November 24th, 2008 · 02:25 PM
341 threads / 59 songs
4,361 posts
Cymru (Wales)
Really cool piece of exploration.
Only bit I dont like is the bass noise behind the main rock guitar. Get rid of that rumble and you have a track screaming for good vocals.
#3November 25th, 2008 · 11:36 AM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,394 posts
United Kingdom
Not bad sound, just needs a bit of paning especially the guitar, which should eparate it from the bass.

Cool drums

Any vox??

Cheers

Denis
#4November 26th, 2008 · 06:55 AM
77 threads / 59 songs
923 posts
Netherlands
bit heavy on the lo end indeed, but nice tune, add a melody(vox?) and it will be great

distorted gtr sounds bit bzzz.., dig recorded? cut some hi and add some hi mid might help out..
#5November 26th, 2008 · 06:14 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
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There are bits and pieces of this song that I think are really killer...Just need to get it together with everything...

Flyer

Nice Rating
#6November 26th, 2008 · 08:05 PM
181 threads / 54 songs
1,932 posts
Canada
This is really sweet. Edit the guitar a bit (when its distorted)...it sounds too...high maybe or something.
too digital?

keep it up
those dums are killer
#7November 27th, 2008 · 02:25 PM
50 threads / 32 songs
292 posts
Canada
Niiiiiice.
Good stuff here..!

Yeah, the you might need to lower the kick and up the volume for the guitar and bass. Great intro and transitions are smooth.

Good work on the drums!

Otherwise... Great composition!

Hoping to hear some more.

   --XFactor--
#8December 2nd, 2008 · 03:09 PM
189 threads / 27 songs
2,834 posts
Germany
nice chorus
#9December 8th, 2008 · 11:16 PM
160 threads / 88 songs
1,666 posts
United States of America
well
Kept my attention...  I get the feeling you mixed it to get the guitar to sound that way... kind of an industrial edge... but I have to say I feel it is too much..  try to clean it up a bit.. it makes it to mucky in my opinion..

     But otherwise pretty well done...

      Have rated..

               JimK
#10December 10th, 2008 · 05:14 PM
176 threads / 26 songs
2,342 posts
United Kingdom
Exploration
I like the production ...........
the sound of the band is great!
But no Vocs!!!!!!!!!
So it sounds like a backing track!!!!!!!!!
So no vote from me cos its obviously ( very good) work in progress

fish
#11December 12th, 2008 · 07:45 PM
160 threads / 33 songs
1,965 posts
United States of America
nice song idea, some of the drumming changes are very nice. I love the clean parts.  the distorted guitar sounds could use a little work.  A good solid bass guitar line would really give it some more drive.
#12January 31st, 2009 · 04:34 PM
30 threads / 30 songs
91 posts
Germany
i like your style, you have some really good ideas, drums are very good too. only one thing, distorted guitars are buzzing, work on that. but all in all, very good!
#13February 1st, 2009 · 09:02 AM
34 threads / 18 songs
68 posts
Denmark
I liked the guitar play!

good heavy stuff
#14February 1st, 2009 · 10:27 AM
24 threads / 15 songs
160 posts
United States of America
yea, I think what you did to the distorted rtm gtr for the intro is good. I compared the assumed chorus to the intro, and my suggestion to you is that you do the same thing for the intro.
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