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Really cool piece of exploration.
Only bit I dont like is the bass noise behind the main rock guitar. Get rid of that rumble and you have a track screaming for good vocals.

Not bad sound, just needs a bit of paning especially the guitar, which should eparate it from the bass.

Cool drums

Any vox??

Cheers

Denis

bit heavy on the lo end indeed, but nice tune, add a melody(vox?) and it will be great

distorted gtr sounds bit bzzz.., dig recorded? cut some hi and add some hi mid might help out..

There are bits and pieces of this song that I think are really killer...Just need to get it together with everything...

Flyer

Nice Rating

This is really sweet. Edit the guitar a bit (when its distorted)...it sounds too...high maybe or something.
too digital?

keep it up
those dums are killer

Good stuff here..!

Yeah, the you might need to lower the kick and up the volume for the guitar and bass. Great intro and transitions are smooth.

Good work on the drums!

Otherwise... Great composition!

Hoping to hear some more.

   --XFactor--

nice chorus

Kept my attention...  I get the feeling you mixed it to get the guitar to sound that way... kind of an industrial edge... but I have to say I feel it is too much..  try to clean it up a bit.. it makes it to mucky in my opinion..

     But otherwise pretty well done...

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               JimK

I like the production ...........
the sound of the band is great!
But no Vocs!!!!!!!!!
So it sounds like a backing track!!!!!!!!!
So no vote from me cos its obviously ( very good) work in progress

fish

nice song idea, some of the drumming changes are very nice. I love the clean parts.  the distorted guitar sounds could use a little work.  A good solid bass guitar line would really give it some more drive.

i like your style, you have some really good ideas, drums are very good too. only one thing, distorted guitars are buzzing, work on that. but all in all, very good!

I liked the guitar play!

good heavy stuff

yea, I think what you did to the distorted rtm gtr for the intro is good. I compared the assumed chorus to the intro, and my suggestion to you is that you do the same thing for the intro.