#1November 17th, 2008 · 11:19 AM
31 threads / 20 songs
96 posts
Canada
Lovers
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This song is not in a battle


Track no. 4 on EP/DEMO

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#2November 17th, 2008 · 06:10 PM
176 threads / 26 songs
2,342 posts
United Kingdom
re: Lovers
Hmm nice
very nice production..great form ..all in tune ....... balanced etc
this ticks may boxes
well done

but wots with the wobble voice ...............

this just sounds too intense with an acoustic for me!!

and you aint singing ...rather kind of talkng .............. thats ok too but it just doesnt ring my bell.

couldnt kick my slippers off and relax or slip into to this......

Still well done.........vote 90+

kersplash

swordfish
#3November 18th, 2008 · 11:13 AM
341 threads / 59 songs
4,361 posts
Cymru (Wales)
This sounds like a short un-plugged version of the real thing, in that I get the sense that if you had more money , more time , more studio equipment...you'd make this song Soo much more.
Are you using a tremolo effect on your vocals or is the shake in your voice? 
The harmony changing at 1:15 is strange,  though I do like the high harmony too.
Cool song , needs working at.
#4March 4th, 2009 · 10:10 AM
31 threads / 20 songs
96 posts
Canada
Thanks guys.
Yeah voice is shaky, re-recording soon.
#5March 4th, 2009 · 02:23 PM
8 threads / 8 songs
53 posts
United Kingdom
Well, I like the 'shaky' voice. Sets it apart a bit and gives it individuality. The voice is strong, not over-the-top and the guitar supports it well. I just think it's a great performance. Simple and well recorded. The sudden change in dynamics does it for me. There's real passion here which is refreshing. Well done!
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