#1October 31st, 2008 · 10:39 PM
15 threads / 15 songs
47 posts
United States of America
New Guitar Smell
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This song is not in a battle


This is a recent one. Its about how I use to take the time to just look at my guitar and play it without caring of how it sounds or what notes it plays. Now I worry about timeing and wrong notes. So this is a way to remind me to get back at those feelings. It was done with two acoustic tracks, one with delay and reverb, one with out, but both with chours. Along with to vocal tracks.

I've been....
wanting to write a song,
but its been far to long,
the creativity seems to be gone.

Even trying,
to make this ryhme,
seems like a waste of time.

Many moons ago before I played,
I inhaled the innerards of my guitar.
Trying to injest some feeling of nature,
allowing me to play true music.

Need to go back,
back before,
I knew what I,
was doing take the time to inhale my guitar.

But now I rush things.
More worried about the timeing.
Now the song has lost feeling.
Which makes it so hard to sing.

This next verse I'll try to be different.
My voice pure with no effects.
Let myself know I truly can sing,
have my head buzzing.

Need to go back,
back before,
I knew what I,
was doing take the time to inhale my guitar.

I believe its working,
seem to have an uplifting feeling.
To fell finally free,
makes me genuily happy.

Need to go back,
back before,
I knew what I,
was doing take the time to inhale my guitar.

When I rushed things,
made me worry about the timeing.
The song lost all feeling.
Which makes it hard to sing.

Need to go back,
back before,
I knew what I,
was doing take the time to inhale my guitar.

Go back way back,
when fingers would bleed,
before there was a star,
take the time to inhale your guitar!

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#2November 9th, 2008 · 01:01 PM
17 threads / 16 songs
99 posts
United States of America
I liked the part around 1:00 to 1:30 it was awesome. I think you should bring the vocals up a little in parts.
"take the time to inhale your guitar" thats a cool line for any guitar player.
#3November 9th, 2008 · 01:03 PM
17 threads / 16 songs
99 posts
United States of America
Also it's funny how music can be your outlet for being fustrated with trying to write it in the first place.
I reallly liked the ideas in this song.  gud job!
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