I added the chorus to it (your hearing the tail end of the song.) and then the outro part of crying inside. I changed the way I was playing the discord and went with a cleaner clean sound then washed it out with verb on purpose.

Like? dislike?

I have a lot of work still to do on it.  drum change ups. a little smoother sound on the distorted guitar part, clean up the tone of the snare.

dude nice tone..Drums are also coming along..Very good work..I love the intro chunk stuff..The break is very cool..I almost hear it with out the solo at first then maybe bring it in..The notes on a chromatic passage towards the end solo work,some times hits me rather dissonant..I think the idea is good but the note chromatic passage needs to be faster in those specific notes in order to resolve the movement a bit less dissonant..This is maybe a matter of sound style so take it with a grain of salt..Love that kick butt arpeggio man!!

A very good idea this song, love the feeling.
Im waiting for the final version

Yeah much better, loved that intro, and the discord makes more sense now, it's definately not killing the listening experience anymore. Now it all makes sense!

That intro really kicks A$$$$!!

 

Nice one man. Love the chugga chugga intro, especially the bass guitar. discordant parts sound good to me, I think you resolve it well. Is there more to this song? tis a bit short

Ian

I agree that the intro does kick arse....This sounds a lot better without the discord.....I just love the break up change up at the :33 mark...pure GENIUS...This song is going places Goat...Just need top get it done....Lyrics, vocals...etc...

Nice work so far..I can't wait to hear the final cut...

Flyer


Nice Rating ( even though is not completed )

yes! goin in the right direction imo  
change is great and killer tones in the solo!

Stopped in for another listen....It sounding better and better
are you guys going to cut this with lyrics in the future?
Flyer

Absolutely LOVE the guitar solo work - fantastic stuff.

Thanks for the comments, yes there is more to this song, I was needing a middle 8 break ..had nothing ..this week I finally came up with a cool riff.  There will be vocals ect. I will put something down.

Tone is nice and warm...first thing i noticed.  Wow! Lovin the lead! with a tiny bit o feedback at the tails! I love it! You are up there my man!  Looking forward to the vox!

Great,sounds like Annihilator