#1October 28th, 2008 · 10:39 PM
157 threads / 30 songs
1,953 posts
United States of America
Crying Inside(changed)

This song is not in a battle

I added the chorus to it (your hearing the tail end of the song.) and then the outro part of crying inside. I changed the way I was playing the discord and went with a cleaner clean sound then washed it out with verb on purpose.

Like? dislike?

I have a lot of work still to do on it.  drum change ups. a little smoother sound on the distorted guitar part, clean up the tone of the snare.

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#2October 28th, 2008 · 11:50 PM
127 threads / 43 songs
2,808 posts
Puerto Rico
dude nice tone..Drums are also coming along..Very good work..I love the intro chunk stuff..The break is very cool..I almost hear it with out the solo at first then maybe bring it in..The notes on a chromatic passage towards the end solo work,some times hits me rather dissonant..I think the idea is good but the note chromatic passage needs to be faster in those specific notes in order to resolve the movement a bit less dissonant..This is maybe a matter of sound style so take it with a grain of salt..Love that kick butt arpeggio man!!
#3October 29th, 2008 · 12:59 PM
38 threads / 37 songs
123 posts
A very good idea this song, love the feeling.
Im waiting for the final version
#4October 29th, 2008 · 03:31 PM
117 threads / 54 songs
3,066 posts
Yeah much better, loved that intro, and the discord makes more sense now, it's definately not killing the listening experience anymore. Now it all makes sense!

That intro really kicks A$$$$!!

#5October 29th, 2008 · 08:04 PM
5 threads / 5 songs
590 posts
United Kingdom
Nice one man. Love the chugga chugga intro, especially the bass guitar. discordant parts sound good to me, I think you resolve it well. Is there more to this song? tis a bit short

#6October 30th, 2008 · 03:32 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
I agree that the intro does kick arse....This sounds a lot better without the discord.....I just love the break up change up at the :33 mark...pure GENIUS...This song is going places Goat...Just need top get it done....Lyrics, vocals...etc...

Nice work so far..I can't wait to hear the final cut...


Nice Rating ( even though is not completed )
#7November 3rd, 2008 · 05:52 AM
77 threads / 59 songs
920 posts
yes! goin in the right direction imo  
change is great and killer tones in the solo!
#8November 4th, 2008 · 02:52 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
Stopped in for another listen....It sounding better and better
are you guys going to cut this with lyrics in the future?
#9November 4th, 2008 · 04:50 PM
3 posts
United Kingdom
This is amazing
Absolutely LOVE the guitar solo work - fantastic stuff.
#10November 8th, 2008 · 10:41 AM
157 threads / 30 songs
1,953 posts
United States of America
Thanks for the comments, yes there is more to this song, I was needing a middle 8 break ..had nothing ..this week I finally came up with a cool riff.  There will be vocals ect. I will put something down.
#11November 9th, 2008 · 03:05 PM
65 threads / 2 songs
1,062 posts
United States of America
Tone is nice and warm...first thing i noticed.  Wow! Lovin the lead! with a tiny bit o feedback at the tails! I love it! You are up there my man!  Looking forward to the vox!
#12September 22nd, 2010 · 03:53 AM
21 threads / 20 songs
59 posts
Great,sounds like Annihilator
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