How many hours I've spent running away
To be somewhere only I know
My steps were so fast that and I didn't look back
To see if something is missing around

Now I walk through the door, tuck off my clothes
There's something more than just being alone
Leaving my shoes, the ones people know me by
And my naked foot is on the ground this time


Is there something wrong in this strange feel
I know that no one will come, because nobody needs
To be here with me - I'm alone on this beach


Empty shore of the sea where i finally know myself
That i also need someone to share my love
It's just feelings, but i know that i mean it
I miss a hand on my back

tuck off my clothes  

what a dark song.... please more of that

What a feeling you create here! Nice work. Verrryyyy dark.

Good rating.

brilliant! loved it. I particuarly like the line "Leaving my shoes, the ones people know me by". I don't know why, its just nice imagery. Good job

Ian

you do a great job of building up a song, the mix is good, nice clean, ballanced lows and highs, , very fine vocal performance, loved the phased guitar lead, very nice, pro stuff.  get a very high vote.

beautifull!

Wow real nice job putting this together.

HmmmMMm well I did think the vocals were a bit off here and there ... but only in a few spots which is the only criticism I have. Maybe theyre too dry... lol...

Great atmosphere you're setting. Really. Nice job on the lyrics aswell. Keep it up.

Really great feeling you're put across here. Vocals aren't perfect, but they're good!

Good job!

Started off, and I didn't really like the vocals - but at 30 secs, when you start to build it up I'm enjoying it.  Then when you fill out the sound even more, I started to think that it was a great song!

And that's the way I feel overall I guess.  I'm not totally blown away by your singing; I'm not convinced by the effect used on the lead guitar solo (I would have had a very subtle overdrive, and minimal chorus).  But I do like this song big time!

Well done