A song I wrote over the weekend, my girlfriend did all the singing and lyrics.

Looks like u had a Pretty productive weekend mate , love the song
 grooves & arrangement all cool.
Tek wise .
GFs vox so contemporary for the style sweet
guitars tidy here strumming round chorus , but that could be of the drums which get busy round there , guess what I mean is sync up those strums bit more with the snare and get it punchy , works well against the verse which has lovely groove. in  and there great tones , natural and gritty.
Thanks mate really enjoyed over all a top show
rte high 

yea i liked her voice, felt like it suited for this song. But i think it's too much sycopation on the guitar, and the bass/kick drum. Hmmm... as I am listening to it I don't think the kick drum goes with the guitar on the chorus, they are synchronize in time, but maybe try the snare or just leave the kick out and just let the guitar syncopation lead the chorus.

starts real nice, but the rhytm problem in the chorus does spoil it for me
nice voice indeed, guitar sounds good too

its a cool grove, but i do agree with rapcloudstrife. the strumming and melody are cool though. i like the voice, and the song has a lot of potential. keep up the good work