#1September 30th, 2008 · 10:00 PM
2 threads / 2 songs
7 posts
United States of America
Escape
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Please vote for this song !
Current votes: 3 (needs min. 15)
It’s in the battle 2008-10


This is a song that Bret wrote and i tried to come up with some music. this was done in one or two takes ?
it need work but i think it could be a great song.
What do you think ???????

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#2October 1st, 2008 · 06:03 PM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
I think its a really cool song....needs work! .........It needs more music, simply more instruments.
The clean guitar sound works in parts but I think most of it needs a more raunchy rock sound, not only to carry the tune better but to also give your man something to really sing with.
He's got an excellent voice, a touch of Eddy Vedder in this style.

Listening again...the guitar is too soft and too close, sounds like it's coming out of a little 50w amp., the vocal is crisp and positioned well.
Cant you play / process the guitar through something like Guitar Rig 2 ?
#3October 22nd, 2008 · 03:46 PM
54 threads / 29 songs
1,552 posts
United Kingdom
Vocals excellent - great delivery, good timbre to the voice.
Song itself is a little disappointing as it doesn't really go anywhere - perhaps additional instruments would help, but I think it's not dynamically interesting enough.  Add some sort of break, a bit of harmony, and the extra instruments and this could be a great sounding song.
#4October 24th, 2008 · 01:23 PM
10 posts
United States of America
Really nice vocals.  Strong feeling and emotion.  Simple guitar.  good work.  I felt like I was relaxing with a drink and nothing to worry about or do.  Haven't had that in a while.
thanks
#5October 24th, 2008 · 03:06 PM
187 threads / 27 songs
2,798 posts
Germany
this guitar sound happens when you send the guitar signal directly to the mixer or soundcard w/o preamp. That's why you should use an amp and pick up the signal with a microphone to the mixer. the voice is really really excellent and fits this genre.
#6October 24th, 2008 · 06:42 PM
157 threads / 30 songs
1,952 posts
United States of America
I like the idea and the vocal melody is nice , it flow well with the guitar chords. some production stuff but over all it's good. I think the vocalist did a very good job .
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