This song was a response to the book written by my fav poet author Kalhil Gibran, "The Broken Wings" It was written in 1996 and is a very sloppy recording, but you;'ll get the gist of it I'm sure! Enjoy! =)

yikes, there are so many recoding flaws in this and the vocals suck too ok...let me have it...

This doesn't sound too bad, considering it's a sloppy recording from 12 years ago!
yeah, definitely not CD quality, but I can hear what you were going for.
It sounds like the band slowed down a bit on the tempo at about 1:30 and I can hear a bit of a problem happening at 3:38, but you could definitely take the song and rework it now.  It would be pretty sweet.
Peace

I like it.. Kind of reminds me of the Breeders. Very 90's. Makes sense since it was written then.