Ok here is something different from my previous works.

Vocals will be re-recorden with better equipment..



Ok; waiting for critiques. It still sounds amatorish (whoa, what a word !!) to me, and dont know why.

APART

It's alright
Believe me..
It's alright now.
Never stop dreaming that we're together;
It's alright now..
It's alright now...

We've never been apart so long..
..but it's alright now, it's alright, now.
You've never been this far from me..
..but I'm alright now, I'm alright, now.

Sometimes things just fall apart,
Sometimes things just fall apart,
Sometimes things just fall apart..
..but it's alright.

This song has been posted for ages, and no comments.  Strange... it sometimes goes like that!

So what do I think?
It's great - very dreamy feeling overall.  A nice ambiance.
Recording quality all good.
Interesting vocal effects, perhaps slightly overdone as they lose impact over the whole song (the stereo delay I mean).  Vocals are well delivered with loads of feeling coming through.
Like the build up just before the ending (at 3:40ish), and the ending is good.

I guess one downside is that it's a little busy throughout - try a bit of the "less is more" principle - don't fill all the spaces with sound.

Overall, I think this is a really good song though.
Well done